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Somehow I found it difficult
Hi everyone, finally i finally wrote a notebook after i found it finding it difficult to get started.
i I always wondering what should I write in this media and I decided to write about my recent activities.
I am an university student, my major in is microbiology and I must start my final project as a student. Yes, this is my last year in university as bachelor student (aamiin!). I must found find my final project topic and then I will work in the laboratory for almost 3-5 month. Until now, i am not I haven't found it yet, because i am I am lazy~
I want to graduate soon, maybe in July 2014 and I want to study in Europe, or Japan or Korea as a graduate student to reach my dream to get of getting a Master Degree. I just a dream, dreaming is still allowed, isnt it? :D
That's it for today. My friend always said that there is no problem with my English, but I think it is still lacking in many ways, so I hope there are any some suggestion and advice about my writing. Thank you very much for your time reading this mess :D
Notes:
- I'm not sure what you meant by 'after I found it difficult'
- I on it's own is always capital or in I'm or I'd > whenevery I means saya!
-'I decided to write about my activities recently' could mean that you recently decided to write - by putting 'recent activities' the meaning is clearer
- (aamiin!) - what does this mean? I don't think it's English. If you are just trying to casually express syour feelings you could use yipee - for excitment or yikes - if you are nervous about finishing - both are very informal.
- 'then I will work in the laboratory for almost 3-5 month.' - you don't need to say almost because you have already given a range. you could say 'almost 5 months' OR '3-5 months'
- 'because I am lazy~' - this is correct but I think in this kind of informal writing it sounds more natural to use I'm.
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