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I have a Bachellor's Degree in Communication and am pursuing a Master's in Middle Eastern and Islamic Studies. While I am a native English speaker, I have formally studied Spanish and Arabic. My current goal is to pursue Arabic and become fluent through the help of more advanced curriculum. After I have mastered these languages, I hope to move on to Italian or Hindi. I have tutored students of all ages in English, Spanish and Arabic and hope to help others with their own language-learning goals. If you would like help with these languages or are an Arabic teacher, please reach out to me.
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    The Pope Visit

    I don't have a religion. I have ever thought only a few times if god exists or not. I believe in destiny somehow, so I think there is god. However, whenever I watch some terrifying circumstances, such as war, terrorism, and murder, I think there might not be god-if he does exist, why doesn't he save those innocent people? As now, I think god or the law of the universe makes it everything. (This sentence is a little unclear)

    Although I am a little suspicious of every religion, I have been impressed by the Pope who has stayed in Korea recently. I have heard of him before, but what I only knew was that he is from Argentina, which is very meaningful because most Popes are from Europe. This morning, I was watching a kind of ceremony where the Pope goes around a number of people who want to see him. There are some sections which indicate some groups' places such as the late cruise accident victims, the employee union from a car company (they were fired from the company unreasonably), and some old ladies who were forced to be sex slaves by the Japanese army. Those groups have the most difficult and controversial matters in Korea more lately. The pope went to all of the sections and consoled the victims as he ever promised. He hugged them, held their hands, and has a conversation with them for a short time.

    While I was watching him, I think how generous and humanistic he is. Even the Korean government doesn't care about their matters, and we have forgotten all of their problems since those matters are so complex and difficult that they take a lot of time to be solved. He is not related to those matters directly, so the ceremony could have been held without visiting those people. However, he didn't ignore or just pass those matters of Korea, but he faced them at his will. Thanks to him, people could get interested in solving and compromising those matters again. I think he is the very person who knows how to use his power,authority, and fame for the right purpose.  (You used the word "matters" a lot in this sentence. It got a little confusing.)
    Although I don't have a religion, I really get to admire and respect him right now.

     

    Wonderful work!

    I agree with you as well. I'm not religious, but I greatly admire the Pope. His work and conviction is inspiring!!

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    August 16, 2014
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    Introduction

    Hi you all!
    My name is Mariangela. I live in Italy, and I'm 34. I need to improve my English for personal interest and work. In return, I'll can chat in Italian.
    I'm friendly, interested in art, music, travel, and everything new!
    Ciao!

     

    Looks pretty good! Only a few corrections to smooth it out.

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    August 16, 2014
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    كمبيوتر مكسرة هذا أسبوع كان مجنون بسبب كمبيوري مكسرة! هذه مشكلة لأن صفوفي سيبدأون الاسبوع التالي. في الخمس, أنا أشتريت كمبيوتر جديد. الكمبيوتر غالي السعر ولكن أحب كمبيوتري جديد! الآن أستطيع أن أدرس مع لا مشكلة.
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    August 14, 2014
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    What I do every day

    Usually I I usually get up at 7 o`clock. I like to get up earlier, because then than I have enough time for my obligations and to relax. too for relaxes. I`m I never skip breakfast. and I usually have breakfast at home or, if I`m in hurry, on university, I have breakfast in some bakery near the university. My classes are not in some time. Sometimes my classes they are finished earlier, but sometimes not. When I have a break, then I eat have lunch. When I come back home I have relax a little relax, then I study. In the evening I do have a little exercise. I dance in one folklore group. And I usually go to bed at 11:30p.m. o`clock.


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    I usually get up at 7 o'clock. I like to get up earlier, because then I have enough time for my obligations and to relax. I never skip breakfast. I usually have breakfast at home or, if I'm in hurry, I have breakfast in some bakery near the university. Sometimes my classes  are finished earlier, but sometimes not. When I have a break, I eat lunch. When I come back home I relax a little, then I study. In the evening I do a little exercise. I dance in one folklore group. I usually go to bed at 11:30p.m. 

     

    I hope this helps! Let me know if you have any questions. - Alicia

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    August 14, 2014
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    أول كتاباتي هذا أول كتاباتي. .أسمي اليشا. عمري 23 و اعيش في واشنطن عين اذهب الى الجامعة لدرجة الماجستير. ادرس الاسلام و الشرق الاوسط في الجامعة. لقد درست اللغة العربية الفصحى لأربعة سنوات و هذه صعبة قليلا.
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