The Pope Visit

I don't have a religion. there are so many ways this sentence could have been written. one example with the same words: only a few times have i thought if god exists. I have ever thought only a few times if god exists or not. I believe in destiny somehow, so I think there is god. However, whenever I watch some terrifying circumstances such as war, terrorism, and murder, I think there might not be god-if he does exist, why doesn't he save those innocent people? As now, I think god or the law of the universe makes it everything.

Although I am a little suspicious of every religion, I have been impressed by the pope who has stayed in Korea until now. I have heard of him before, but what I only know was that he is from Argentina, which is very meaningful because most popes are from Europe. This morning, I was watching a kind of ceremony where the pope goes around a number of people who want to see him. There are some sections which indicate some groups' places such as the late cruise accident victims, the employee union from a car company (they were fired from the company unreasonably), and some old ladies who were forced to be sex slaves by Japanese army. Those groups have the most difficult and controversial matters in Korea more lately. The pope went to all of the sections and consoled the victims as he ever promised. He hugged them, held their hands and hashad a conversation with them for a short time.

While I was watching him, I think how generous and humanistic he is. Even Korean government doesn't care about their matters, and we have forgotten all of their problems since those matters are so complex and difficult that they take a lot of time to be solved. He is not related to those matters directly, so the ceremony could have been held without visiting those people. However, he didn't ignore or just pass those matters of Korea, but he faced them at his will. Thanks to him, people could get interested in solving and compromising those matters again. I think he is the very person who knows how to use his power,authority, and fame for the right purpose.
Although I don't have a religion, I really get to admire and respect him right now.

The Pope's Visit

I don't have a religion. I have only ever thought only a few times if about whether god exists or not. I believe in destiny somehow, so I think there is a god. However, whenever I watch some terrifying circumstances events such as war, terrorism and murder, I think there might not be a god-if he does exist, why doesn't he save those innocent people? And now, I think god or the laws of the universe makes it everything. (not sure if that's what you were intending to say)

Although I am a little suspicious of every religion, I have been impressed by the Pope who has is staying in Korea until now. (as above). I have heard of him before, but what all I only know was is that he is from Argentina, which is very meaningful because most Popes are from Europe. This morning, I was watching a kind of ceremony where the Pope goes around was amongst a number of people who wanted to see him. There are were some sections which indicate consisted of some groups places such as the late recent cruise accident victims, the employee's union from a car company (they were fired from the company unreasonably), and some old ladies who were forced to be sex slaves by the Japanese army. Those groups have represent the most difficult and controversial matters in Korea more lately. The Pope went to all of the sections and consoled the victims as he ever promised. He hugged them, held their hands and had a conversation with them for a short time.

While I was watching him, I thought how generous and humanistic he was. Even the Korean government doesn't care about these matters, and we have forgotten all of their problems since because these matters are so complex and difficult that they take a lot of time to be resolved. The Pope is not directly related to those matters directly, so the ceremony could have been held without visiting those people. However, he didn't ignore them or just pass them by, but he faced them at his willingly. Thanks to him, people could get become interested in resolving and compromising those matters again. I think he is the very a person who knows how to use his power, authority and fame for the right purpose.

Although I don't have a religion, I really get to admire and respect him right now.

Excellent Min - very well written. And I couldn't agree with you more - a people's Pope :)

The Pope Visit

I don't have a religion. I have ever thought only a few times if god exists or not. I believe in destiny somehow, so I think there is god. However, whenever I watch some terrifying circumstances, such as war, terrorism, and murder, I think there might not be god-if he does exist, why doesn't he save those innocent people? As now, I think god or the law of the universe makes it everything. (This sentence is a little unclear)

Although I am a little suspicious of every religion, I have been impressed by the Pope who has stayed in Korea recently. I have heard of him before, but what I only knew was that he is from Argentina, which is very meaningful because most Popes are from Europe. This morning, I was watching a kind of ceremony where the Pope goes around a number of people who want to see him. There are some sections which indicate some groups' places such as the late cruise accident victims, the employee union from a car company (they were fired from the company unreasonably), and some old ladies who were forced to be sex slaves by the Japanese army. Those groups have the most difficult and controversial matters in Korea more lately. The pope went to all of the sections and consoled the victims as he ever promised. He hugged them, held their hands, and has a conversation with them for a short time.

While I was watching him, I think how generous and humanistic he is. Even the Korean government doesn't care about their matters, and we have forgotten all of their problems since those matters are so complex and difficult that they take a lot of time to be solved. He is not related to those matters directly, so the ceremony could have been held without visiting those people. However, he didn't ignore or just pass those matters of Korea, but he faced them at his will. Thanks to him, people could get interested in solving and compromising those matters again. I think he is the very person who knows how to use his power,authority, and fame for the right purpose.  (You used the word "matters" a lot in this sentence. It got a little confusing.)
Although I don't have a religion, I really get to admire and respect him right now.

Wonderful work!

I agree with you as well. I'm not religious, but I greatly admire the Pope. His work and conviction is inspiring!!