I received a special present from my friend, such a surprise!

I've never thought I will have a pet again that is a present from my friend. They were  born  two weeks ago so that so they are little, so  weak. Life is... how can I say that... amazing, I wanted to have them before but it was so many years ago. I'm busy , therefore, I didn't take care of them so much, they passed away after few weeks. After years, they came back as a new life. Just like something that you lost returned back in other form. maybe an important friend return your side or challenge you didn't overcome then they go back to you.( Sorry, but I don't understand this sentense) So ,as I say, LIFE IS ALWAYS AMAZING. You don't know what will happen to you.

OH... I forgot to introduce them, they are FISH, guppy！

Concentrate Attention

I have  always been interested in some fresh things so I can't concentrate attention. I feel this is very bad and I hope to change...T.T

I had tried some ways for this but always didn't have obvious results. 0.0

Everybody works very hard, I hope I can work harder. ^w^

Hi, friends~
My name is Aldhi Wahyu Pratama and usually my friend call me Aldhi. I'm from Indonesia, and I want to learn International Language such as English, Japanese, France, and etc. :) :) :)

I´m here to speak English. Kisses

Some college students choose to take courses in a variety of subject areas.

Some college students choose to take courses in a variety of subject areas. Others choose to focus on a single subject. Which approach do you think is better?


Well, I think it is better for students to take courses in a variety of subject areas. Firstly, because, (The first reason for it is that) taking various courses can help students find what they love and get more job opportunities. If you take a course in computer science and you like it, you may want to work in Apple Company. If you take a course in food nutrition and enjoy it, you may want to join in McDonalds and help them develop a new menu. Secondly,because, taking various courses is a good way to broaden our knowledge.  Meanwhile, we can meet people from different fields and make friends with them. In this way, we can widen our eyesight further, and build a strong network.


If possible, please help me with pronouciation (pronunciation) too. Thank you!

Your essay is very good! You don't have any serious mistakes. The only think I don't like is words like "secondly" and "because". In my opinion it's better to use any other constructions  bacause sentences with these words seem to be separated from the previous one. But in spite of it, you've done a great job! ;)