I miss you——my old house

When l was in high school, our house was forced torn down. l attended middle school in another small city. My family hadn't been living in this that small city until l finished my high school. Once l have When I had a holiday l would go to my homeland hometown. But now our old house doesn't exist. l miss our old house. l spent my childhood there. My childhood is buried there. l miss our old house.
The old house was in the countryside. The scenery around it is was very good. A piece of green is There was a lawn in front of my house. There we can could breathe more fresher air than in the city. Many pictures l took many pictures there. Look， it's just one picture of them this is just one of the pictures. l think it is very beautiful. l miss it (my old house) very much. It reminds me of a lot of interesting memories.
l miss you, l miss you, l miss you, my old house.

Sorry to hear about your house :(

essay, line graph

The graphs illustrates the numbers of goods that were transported by 4 four different types of transportation in the UK between 1974 and 2002. The figures are given in per million tones tons. Roughly, it can be seen that transportation via using road was the most popular, followed by water, rail and pipeline methods.
The number of goods transported by motors where were the highest of all time. In 1990, it started at about 70, which were was as twice as much as those that were shipped by boats and trains (about 40), before rising steadily to 80 until 1994. It all so also increased dramatically in the last 8 years and finished at just a little under 100 in 2002. Between 1978 and 1982, the goods transported by ships increased sharply to about 60 and remained constant until 1994 before they experienced a minimal drop in 1998. and Then they experienced a significant increase, during the last 4 years, ending up at about 62. In contrast, the number of goods being transported by railway decreased steadily to above 30 in 1984 and then faced with a fluctuate trend fluxuated between 1984 and 1995 before, recovering to where it started in 1974. Finally, the number of good shipped by pipeline was the smallest number when it stared (4-5) but and it had been increasing increased steadily over the first decade to a little above 20. But interestingly, not unlike the others, and it remained the same in throughout the rest of the time frame.

hi everyone, please help me out to correct the essay

[Some of your sentences were a bit long, so I broke them down into two sentences.  Nice job!]

Tips for the beginners who want to learn the Thai language

"The first Tip"

For anyone who's never listened to the Thai language before or has just a little experience about with it, you should be able to distinguish Thai language from others languages first. It doesn't matter if you don't understand what they say is being said because the goal is to tune your ears in order to get use to Thai's tonations and rhythm. You can listen to the Thai language from in movies, musics and news. If you feel it's boring for to just listening without knowing anything about the conversation, it's ok to open your language use subtitles.

I'm gonna continue I'll post the second tip in a few days. By the way, I'm not good in at English so if I'm using the wrong grammar or word or whatever, it would be great to have someone correct it.

Thank you and hope you guys enjoy leaning Thai. ^^

[Your English is actually pretty good.  This is a nice tip too, for learning Thai or any language.]

Chulalongkorn Day

On October 23rd of every year, we have a holiday. It is Chulalongkorn day. This day is for to commemorate to the King Rama V of Thailand (King Chulalongkorn). King Chulalongkorn is a the person who established Chulalongkorn University. So today we went to the Royal Plaza for to pay respects to His Majesty King Chulalongkorn. I am really proud of being a Chulalongkorn student.

Credit: The photo is from one of my friends.

[Your friend took a great photo!  I've heard that King Chulalongkorn was a wise king, and this photo shows how much he is still respected by Thai people.]

Cold weather

In my town, today was a day very rainy day and the temperature declined a few degrees celsius. It's making getting a little of cold and the day is was very boring, however, toward during the time that the weather not was setting in this way here like this.

[The meaning of the last part of your sentence was a little unclear.  I guessed at your meaning.]

Dear John,
What are you doing? I'm in London and I'm having a fantastic time here. I arrived three days ago and I'll be staying here for about four days. I'm residing in at a college with other students from the rest of Italy. I'll be studying English in London for a week with an English teacher. Her name's Apostolia and she comes from Cyprus. She's about thirty years old and she's very nice and funny. She has explained the English future tense to us recently. She'll be accompanying us to visit London city. Then, in the afternoon, we're going into to the London Eye to see the city from above. At 5 o'clock we're returning to the college. At 6 o'clock we'll have dinner. In the evening we usually go out for a trip on the town. Tonight we'll be watching an English film. At the moment I'm having fish and chips, it's fantastic! And what about you? Did you have a special dinner?

See you soon.