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Sentence Structure
My principal mistake when I learn a new language is the sentence structure. When i learned Spanish ( last year ) this was easy to me, because the sentence structure is similar to Portuguese ( There were too also some sentences that wasn't, of course ). But, when I'm writing in English, the sentence structure is totally different, some peoples people(people is already the plural) in italki has already told me about it, and I will try to improve this skill. In French ( until now, because i'm a begginer ) the sentence structure is easy to learn , to write and to understant understand.
Well, I think there are some other details, no big deal, but as you know, I'm not fluent, so I wasn't able to correct them.
Oh, and about the correction from "too" to "also", you couldn't use "too" there because it can only be used at the end of the phrase.
0 votedSeptember 20, 20132- Poetry One of the things I like the most is writing! I've always been passionate for poetry, so when I was around 9 years old I decided to try this art by myself. As I'm not fluent at english yet, I'll try to translate one of my poems, to practice. Below the translation I'll put the original one, in portuguese. I'm not quite in love with this one... It's really old and far from being my best, in my opinion. But I'm afraid I can't translate my newest ones yet, so... Here it goes. Like the tears falling from our faces That were first in our bodies The words droping from my tired hands Took control, at first, of my soul I'm an instrument of my art, as much as I would be if I didn't put it on paper My tactic, nor secret or sacred Is what makes me essencial for the charm As artist, I incorporate myself to poetry Putting me into it, servant of it's sovereignty Equating my value to whose demeans me (I feel this isn't correct.. although I can't make it better. Help me, please!) And, however, sets me free I feel I'm a loving mother, I admit I'm a puerile daughter Wich(or who) would be, after all, the starting point? Screaming, voices never heard ask me Who came first: the poet or the poetry? ------------------------------------- The original one: Como as lágrimas que pingam de nossos rostos Que já existiam, primeiramente, em nossos corpos As palavras que pingam de minhas mãos cansadas Tomaram conta, primeiramente, de minh'alma Sou instrumento da minha arte, tanto quanto O seria se não a transmitisse em prática Minha tática, nem secreta nem sagrada É o que me torna essencial ao encanto Enquanto artista, incorporo-me à poesia Inserindo-me nela, serva de sua soberania Igualando meu valor àquela que me inferioriza E que, no entanto, concede-me alforria Sinto-me amável mãe, admito-me pueril filha Qual(ou quem) seria, afinal, a reta de partida? Aos gritos, questionam-me vozes jamais ouvidas Quem veio primeiro: o poeta ou a poesia?September 20, 201350
À propos de moi. Enchantée.
Salut à tous! Je vais essayer décrire moi physiquement. Je ne suis pas grande, mais je ne suis pas petite. Je ne suis pas grosse et je ne suis pas mince , je suis svelte. (Est-ce que c'est correctement en Francais?) Mes yeux sont foncés. Mes cheveux ne sont pas lisses ou bouclés ils sont ondulés. Je suis brune. Je crois je suis très jolie, peut-être même belle.
Je parle l'anglais bien mais je parle français un peu et je veux connaître cet langue. J'adore les chansons françaises. Quand j'était adolescent, j'ai lu presque tous les romans de Dumas. J'aime les films françaises.(I don't know for sure if the rest is correct, I'm not fluent at french... Hope it was helpful! ps: pay attention to the plural of nouns)
0 votedSeptember 19, 20130It's hard to compare them, 'cause they don't belong to a similar group, love is an emotion and money is material. But anyway, one is worth nothing without the other... Being rich and having NO love at all(including family, friends) would be really sad. And also, love can't buy you clothes, a house and food. Unless you get married to someone rich, but it must be horrible depending on someone for the rest of your life. My advice would be: get rich and keep your family and REAL friends around, and if you fall in love, great; if not, great anyway. And also have dogs. Dogs = love, lol
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