The Adventure
I want to tell you about one adventure from my life that I will remember for the rest of my life.
It happened this summer. My friends from Belarus came to (visit) me. They wanted to see the Carpathians mountains. The next morning I woke up early in the morning. We decided to go to the mountain Rune. The height of this mountain is 1479 m. But the road to the top of the mountain was a length of 8 km.
It was very difficult to kee up (to keep up?). My friends and I often stopped (and) sat down at the edge of the road to rest.
But the beauty we saw at the top of (the) mountain (polonine) cost of this suffering (was worth the suffering)! Such a beauty (that) I didn't see (have never seen) any time in my life. I caught my breath from (the) sight I saw there. We spent an hour on polonyna. Then we started to going down. You might think that going down - it's (is) easy. Nothindg of the sort! I thought so too, until I started to go downhill.
The next two days I didn't (couldn't) feel my legs. And when I (did) started to feel like I could feel only the pain in my legs.Really good :) (and an interesting story!)
0 votedSeptember 18, 20130My experiences in London
I've been in (to) London three times until now (before).
(the) First time I was eighteen and I went to England with my sister for (to) study English during (for) three weeks in Summer. The school was close to Leeds but we also had the opportunity to visit other cities, among which (including) London. It has been (was) a beautiful experience but (was) too short!
I better experienced London the second time I went there for (a) holiday with my ex boyfriend. We booked a room in a bed & breackfast near Regent's Park, it was Winter and it was very cold. London seemed to me amazing (to me)! I was fascinated with the Tate Modern, the National Gallery, St. Paul Cathedral, Westminister Abbey, Tower Bridge... and then the beautiful markets, my passion! My favourite was Brick Lane market, but also liked Portobello Road market and Covent Garden market.
Last time I was in London was in 2007 and I went there alone for a month in Summer. I wanted to improve my English and, why not, have fun! I rented a room in a flat and spent three hours every day studing in a language school. This allowed me to know a lot of people and I always had a lot of funny things to do with my flatmates and friends from the school. That was the best part of this experience: (the) people! Today I am still in contact with some of them and I am very happy for this. (because of this)
I have a beautiful memory memories of all the times in London and I hope to come back soon.
Revisions would be very (really) appreciated!è molto buono!
0 votedSeptember 18, 20131First Note
I'm Laura. I'm from Cali, Colombia.
My city weather (The weather in my city) is usually sunny and warm.I like go to eat ice cream on sunny days.
I like go to dance salsa with my friends. Recently I ended (finished) my career (my studies?) I'm (in) speech language pathology.
Now I'm working with people who have hearing loss adapting hearing aids.
I want (to) learn more english and learn about other cultures.Es bueno, solo con los verbos, el segundo verbo en una frase tiene que estar en el infinitivo (to go, to learn etc.) :)
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