First Note

I'm Laura. I'm from Cali, Colombia.
My city weather (The weather in my city) is usually sunny and warm. 

I like go to eat ice cream on sunny days. 
I like go to dance salsa with my friends. Recently I ended (finished) my career (my studies?) I'm (in) speech language pathology.
Now I'm working with people who have hearing loss adapting hearing aids.
I want (to) learn more english and learn about other cultures.

Es bueno, solo con los verbos, el segundo verbo en una frase tiene que estar en el infinitivo (to go, to learn etc.) :)

First Note

I'm Laura. I'm from Cali, Colombia.

My city weather is usually sunny and warm. I like go to eat ice cream on sunny days (No puede usar "go."  Es mejor utilizar menos palabras).

I like go to dance salsa with my friends (Lo mismo.)

Recently I ended my college career and I'm a speech language patologist. (O escribiría "Recently I graduated from college with a degree in speech language pathology."  Cualquiera frase es buena.)

Now I'm working with people who have hearing loss adapting hearing aids. (¡Buena frase!)
I want to learn more english and learn about other cultures.  (Tienes que ulitizar "to" porque la palabra "learn" en su frase es un verbo). 

Laura,

Escribió una buena reducción.  Va a mejorar con los verbos y fueron sus solos errores.  Si tienes unas dudas de inglés, preguntame por favor.