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hi there, this is Angus Wang from China, I want to improve my English because I'm doing my job usually in English. And if possible, I also want to learn some French. I sincere hope I can make friends on italki.
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    OK!

    秀色可餐-餐风沐雨-雨过天晴

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    August 28, 2013
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    好心的朋友!请帮我修改一下!!

    今天大镇和海玉一起去演唱会了。因为最近这个歌手特别受欢迎,所以演唱会的票一下子就卖光了。他们能来也不容易。幸好朋友突然有了约会才把票给他们的。这个歌手唱的时候,很多人都跟着他唱了。大镇说他们作为歌迷,这个歌手的歌他们都会唱。

     

    大体上没什么问题都能懂,不过读起来稍微有点别扭。比如说最后一句,更好的表达应该是“大镇说,他们作为这个歌手歌迷,他的歌他们都会唱。”这样感觉会更通畅一些。

     

    以上只是我的拙见,仅代表个人观点,不足之处还望见谅。

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    August 27, 2013
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