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Question:
You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
§ explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months
§ say how your work could be done while you are away
§ ask for his/her help In arranging it
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Dear Simpson,
I am writing to you because I would be interested in submitting an application for the company's head office training course. I heard about it from our company's official website and I would be interested in taking part. This training will take 6 months and will include advanced programming skills and algorithm implementation. As you know, I am interested in every algorithm and coding style.
Firstly, we have three projects which we have to finish before the end of this year. I have to be at the company's head office to take part in this course. So could I change my job and work remotely? I believe I can finish our projects on time. With regard to our weekly meeting, would it be possible to join it online? We can use meeting tools, for example, Microsoft Teams, or Google Meet.
Secondly, with regard to the details of my job. I can finish all of the software jobs in time, including design, programming, debugging, and testing. But if there are any signal issues, I am afraid I can't debug it without equipment. So, would you please assign this task to another colleague?
I would really appreciate it if you could accept my application to join the course, and allow me to work remotely.
Yours sincerely,
Garfield.