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- Students Play Computers (求修改^ ^，谢谢；Please help me correct my essay^ ^, thanks a million) Computers nowadays become more and more funtional. With a computer, one can chat with friends, share his or her life with others, watch the lastest films and play interesting computer games. Therefore college students tend to love playing computers. This occurence has aroused the public concern. Some believe that students should play computers, for it frees students from pressure temperarily. Besides, playing computers helps students improve their concentration. While the others argue that students are easily addicted to playing computers; and that some students have become tired of study because of computer games. So they agree that students should not play computers. As for me, I share the opinion of the second group. As a kind of entertainment, playing computers is needed but not essential for students. So students should not spend most of their precious time on playing computers. Instead, they should spend more time on learning to develop themselves during college years. 请帮我看看文章的论据是否有力，万分感谢。^ ^ Could you please help me correct my essay? Are the supporting details strong enough to support the arguments being made? Thanks a million! ^ ^August 18, 201300
- Fighting for the mark of 60 Examination is a reflection of a student's study in a certain subject. With the exams, one can improve his or her learning. However, more and more students tend to fight only for the mark of 60 to pass the exams instead of gaining knowledge. The main reason for this phenomenon is that these students are not strict enough with themselves. After the Chinese College Entrance Examination, for which they've tried their best, many students consider the college years to be a time for relaxing. Besides, many parents and teachers in China have been emphasizing too much on students' passing the exams instead of learning itself. Therefore, quite a few students nowadays consider it much more important to gain the mark of 60 and fight for it. But as for me, there's something better than the mark of 60. It's knowledge. The mark of 60 can guarantee your graduation, but can't help you in your career and life as your knowledge does. So it's wiser to put all your efforts on mastering your major instead of fighting for the "pass" in exams. Only in this way, can you guarantee both your graduation and your career.August 15, 201310
Venice
I'm an Italian man. I live in Venice, one of the most famous cities around the world. I've been living here since I was born and I like my city very much.
Venice is located on the north-east part of Italy, in the region called Veneto. It has a population of 270,000 and most of them are Italians.
My city is very old. It was built hundreds of years ago and it quickly became the most important trading port in 1700.
We can still remember Marco Polo, one of the most famous citizens. He is famous for writing a book entitled : "The million" where he tells about his journey from Venice to China.
Nowadays, Venice is visited by many tourists from all over the world in every month of year. It's a particular city because it's built up on the water and sorrounded by water everywhere.
Despite being a beautiful and fascinating city for the tourists, it's not easy to live here because of the water and the inconvenient transportation. We can move either by boat or by foot due to the fact that we can't have roads for other types of vehicle.
The city has a lot to see and many things to do. There are thousands of historical places to visit like: S.Marco square, S.Marco church, S.Elena island, The bridge of whisper, The bridge of Rialto and many many others.
I think if you visit Venice properly, you may spend at least a month!
There are also some famous events taking place here, for instance, Cinema exhibition and Biennale art exhibition.
Unfortunately, we have to be faced with some enviromental problems caused by high water that sometimes ruins the houses and the shops around venice.
We have many pigeons as well that usually dirty our monuments and squares. I hope we'll be able to find some solutions for these problems.
If you would like to visit Venice and Italy. I'm willing to help you find all the information that you need. So feel free to contact me via email at: [email protected]
A big hug,
Alessandro0 votedAugust 14, 20130
