Students Play Computers (求修改^ ^，谢谢；Please help me correct my essay^ ^, thanks a million) Computers nowadays become more and more funtional. With a computer, one can chat with friends, share his or her life with others, watch the lastest films and play interesting computer games. Therefore college students tend to love playing computers. This occurence has aroused the public concern. Some believe that students should play computers, for it frees students from pressure temperarily. Besides, playing computers helps students improve their concentration. While the others argue that students are easily addicted to playing computers; and that some students have become tired of study because of computer games. So they agree that students should not play computers. As for me, I share the opinion of the second group. As a kind of entertainment, playing computers is needed but not essential for students. So students should not spend most of their precious time on playing computers. Instead, they should spend more time on learning to develop themselves during college years. 请帮我看看文章的论据是否有力，万分感谢。^ ^ Could you please help me correct my essay? Are the supporting details strong enough to support the arguments being made? Thanks a million! ^ ^