圣诞节。。。

这四年来，（我）只有一次在英国过传统的圣诞节。[it is better to add a subject]

我很想今年回一趟英国，跟家庭家人过这段个又快乐又好玩的节日。

1)To use <em>family</em> in Chinese, if you want to specifiy the people, it is better to use 家人.

2)Counter problem. 一个节日，一段日子。In Chinese, 节日 usually means a particular day, not a period.

但是，我已经知道今年回不了去了。真可惜！[I think it is better to avoid using two 了 in wrriten Chinese :)]

菲律宾的人们大体上是信教的，当然也过圣诞节。

其实在马尼拉的街上，、商店里，都在这段时间都向像英国的一样。

-街上，商店里，都被装饰得很好看[it is necessary to describe the decoration here, otherwise the sentence seems imcomplete]，都挂着五颜六色的fairy灯（彩灯）。[I do not know what is a fairy灯. In Chinese, we usually just say 彩灯, light with different colours. : )]

可是，我还不感觉Christmassy（我还是无法感觉到圣诞的味道）[This literally means<em> I still cannot feel the taste of the Christmas</em>. In Chinese, you can say <em>feel the taste of Christmas</em> to express <em>Christmassy</em>. In modern Chinese, noun is sometimes used as adjective. In this way, you can say 我并不觉得很圣诞。However, it is hard to people to catch you without context.]

为什么？[Christmas without family is not a Christmas :D]

I want to go skiing this Christmas :D

关于时间的一些感慨

不知为何，总觉得今年度假的时间过得特别慢，在漫长的日子里我既迷茫又无助，只能盼望夏天早点结束。时间像口香糖一样，拉得很长很长，完全看不到结尾。我这么难受，是因为在家里完全没事可以做，只能写一些简单的随笔，缓解自己的无聊心情。
在俄语当中有好多动词与时间有着密切的关系。我们喜欢"崔"（催）时间，偶尔用一些手段"杀"时间，无聊时喜欢"打发"时间。可怜的时间被我们崔催，打，甚至杀...会不会有一天，时间会来报仇? 人们会不会完全失去所拥有的时间?

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写得非常好啊！我觉得你写的随笔都比我好了 :D 只有一个错别字

山西〜太原

太原（市）位于山西（省）的中心。[to mention one is a city and the other is a province.]

这座城市比较小，最低海拔是七百六十米。or 这座小城市的最低海拔是七百六十米。

太原三面环山[this is a common way to say this, exp: "四面环海", surrounded by sea]。

由于太原在位于山谷之间，到了冬天每天雾气蒙蒙。

实际上，我怀疑这个现象不是自然的雾气造成的，而是污染。[the original meaning of the sentence was "the phenomenon is not natural fog", according to the context, I think it should be "the phonomenon is not caused by natural fog"]

山西是一个煤省-这个地方最主要的商业活动是开矿，所以，果然天空挺脏。 [In Chinese, we don't say "the sky  is dirty", you can just say "the air pollution is heavy" - 空气污染很严重]
不过，临近春节尘雾逐渐消失了，花也逐渐盛开，环境就越来越好。[I'm not sure what you really want to express here. Literally, the origin sentence in Chinese means "When the Spring Festival comes, the fog disappear quickly and the flowers blossoms quickly". Now I rephrase it like "With the approaching of the Spring Festival, the fog are going away graduately, and the flower are starting to blossom."]

春夏，这两个季节，间我常常去公园散着步，享受好天气。
太原有几个外国人喜欢去聚会的地方。我还在太原的时候，外国人很喜欢去玛雅咖啡厅。这个咖啡厅像西方的咖啡厅差不多一样。，墙上挂着很多油画，也挂着当地摄影家拍的照片。厅里也放着爵士乐或布鲁斯乐。关于说到氛围，灯开得不太亮，所以能令人感到轻松。
太原有几个[if you want to mean "some", “一些” is better here. "几个" implies "not much", lol]名胜古迹。最有名的是双塔寺\永祚寺。这对[counter]双塔是中国最高的。还有太原南边的jinci晋祠.
作为总结〜太原〜冬天又脏又污染的污染又严重。春节之后一天比一天好。玛雅咖啡厅好玩儿。等等

Generally, I have no problem to understand what you want to say. There is some minor things that in Chinese we say it in a different way compare to western culture. I think this can be improved by reading more together writing training&correction : )