Why Wal-Mart hasn't conquered Brazil?

Associated link : http://www.businessweek.com/articles/2014-05-08/why-wal-mart-hasnt-conquered-brazil

Summary

In Latin-America, Wal-Mart is struggling since it has started its business about 20years ago. As people know, this is not Wal-Mart's first failure. Due to tuff (tough) competition and disappointing results, it suffered hard time in South Korea, Germany, and China. However, considering the big issue that fox DNA showed up in meat they sold under the name of dunkey (donkey), the agony that it's getting seems like more painful than before.

Pursuing the aim of relieving these(this) pain and seeking (to)flourish in South-America, this beleaguered company have stuck to having conversation with its shoppers.

However, considering the existance of other non-neglectable big markets in the continent and its own inner logistics problem, experts suggest several ways to improve its sale.
Enalysists say only having a conversatioln with shoppers is no longer a proper way to improve Wal-Mart's interest. The mileston where Wal-Mart will head into can be drawn by considering where Brazilian seek their shoping satisfaction. They are cherry-picker. What they are only interested in is price. To them, the convenience of one-stop shopping is not that important.
Secondly, sticking with everyday low price strategy is hurting the company. Cause, big happening like hyperinflation accured in 1980's no longer exist.

The post above also has many of the corrections I would have made. Good job with writing, but again, spelling seems to be a weak point for you :)

The things left after war 2

Showing this clip to the audience, speaker Deborah challenges us to give them a warm heart. Specifically, she urges us to do a concrete acting (show appreciation) like helping (the) VA, (and) asking questions to your neighbor who seems like (may have) participated in (the) Iraq War even though that that question looks like (it may be) unnecessary, just to see if they want to talk.

As a person who haven't (hasn't) suffer(ed a) war experience in person., it's a little bit hard to feel exactly how awful the thing is and actually now I'm feeling a sort of guilt writing about war on Italki.

We had Korean war 1950 through 1953. and my grandfather was a soldier who entered the war. When I was young he used to hold me in front (of) him in (a) solemn atmosphere. and tell me the strory he (his) story. Another scene that I remember is he never told me that kind of series of stroty (story) without drinking. So...I remember I was more scared of that atmosphere than the strory (story) he used to try to make me understand.

And before I saw this video, I have one streotype like other young man and that is about a veteran. Actually, I dont think this problem is only restricted to young guy, the people older than me also regard them as a talkative guys. They want to talk (about) their private stroty (story) to anyone like bypasser and stranger. No one can avoid to be a game of their companion. As a result, this vedio gave me a chance to think about them more deely, like why they want to talk (about) something eagerly and desperately to strangers, why they can't live their own life like other normal people.