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我的朋友 (description and comparison of friend)
大家好,
Please would you be so kind as to check my grammar etc. I was trying to describe similarities and differences of my friend and I. Hobbies etc.
你好!这是我的朋友。(Hello! This is my friend.)
我的朋友叫Gracie。(Her name is Gracie.)
他今年十五岁,他的生日是三月二十八号。她是一九九八年出生的,所以她属虎。 (This year she is 15 years old. Her birthday is the 28th of March. She was born in 1998 so she has zodiac sign of Tiger.)
我今年十六岁,我是一九九七出生的,所以我属牛。所以她比我小。(This year I am 16 years old, I was born in 1997 so I have zodiac sign of the ox and she is younger than me.)
我比他高。我的朋友很短很矮,可是她说"你太高了!"。(I am taller than her. My friend is short but she says "you are too tall!")
我和她一样瘦。她头发没有我头发那么长她的头发不像我的那么长。我头发比她头发浅色我头发的颜色比她的浅/我的头发比她的头发颜色浅,因为我头发是金发,她头发是棕色。(We are both slim (the same build). Her hair is not as long as mine. My hair is lighter color than hers because my hair is blonde and hers is brunette.)
在冬天的时候,我朋友和我喜欢去滑冰,滑雪和堆雪人。Gracie 滑冰滑得可好了,因为他均衡均得很好因为她的平衡性很好。我滑得没有她滑得那么好。我应该常常练滑冰!(In the winter time, my friend and I like to go ice skating, skiing and build snowman. Gracie's ice skating is extremely good because she has good balance. My ice skating is not as good as hers. I should practice ice skating more often!)
在夏天的时候,我们喜欢去游泳,骑马,攀岩和冲浪。游泳很好玩,我们都喜欢游泳。她游泳游得好,可是她游得没有我游得那么好。(In the summer time, we like to go swimming, horse riding, rock climbing and wind surfing. Swimming is very fun, we both like swimming. Her swimming is good, but not as good as my swimming.)
我们也喜欢骑马。在夏天,天气真好,晴天,暖和,所以我们常常去骑马。我和她一样好。我和我的朋友都爱马。we also like horse riding. In summer, the weather is really good, sunny, nice and warm, so we often go horse riding. We both ride horses well. My friend and I both love horses.)0 votedJuly 16, 20131学中文。Hi everyone is my sentence structure and grammar correct on these sentences?
大家好,
I am writing to my 笔友in Chinese and am trying to perfect my sentence structures. Please would be so kind as to give me some advice on my writing.
谢谢你们!
我说中文说得不太好,所以我想每天练说。I speak chinese not too well, so I want to practice speaking everyday. 我的中文说的不太好,所以我想每天都练习
虽然学外国语很难,但是我对汉语兴趣因为你也学漂亮的中国人,中文和文化。although learning a foreign language is difficult, I am interested in Chinese because you also learn about the beautiful Chinese people, language and culture. 尽管学习一门外语很难,但是我对汉语很感兴趣,因为你可以了解美丽的中国人和优美的语言和文化。
我也想去因为我想连听和说汉语,和中国爬长城。I also want to go (to china) because I want to practice listening and speaking and I want to climb the Great Wall. 我也想去中国,因为我想练习我的听和说,同时我也想去爬长城
我在周末的时候天气晴天在家跟姐姐一起打篮球。In the weekends when the weather is sunny I play basketball with my sister at home.当周末,天气晴朗的时候,我会在家跟我的姐姐一起打篮球0 votedJuly 15, 20131
