学中文。Hi everyone is my sentence structure and grammar correct on these sentences?

大家好，
I am writing to my 笔友in Chinese and am trying to perfect my sentence structures. Please would be so kind as to give me some advice on my writing.
谢谢你们！

我说中文说得不太好，所以我想每天练说。I speak chinese not too well, so I want to practice speaking everyday. 我的中文说的不太好，所以我想每天都练习
虽然学外国语很难，但是我对汉语兴趣因为你也学漂亮的中国人，中文和文化。although learning a foreign language is difficult, I am interested in Chinese because you also learn about the beautiful Chinese people, language and culture. 尽管学习一门外语很难，但是我对汉语很感兴趣，因为你可以了解美丽的中国人和优美的语言和文化。
我也想去因为我想连听和说汉语，和中国爬长城。I also want to go (to china) because I want to practice listening and speaking and I want to climb the Great Wall. 我也想去中国，因为我想练习我的听和说，同时我也想去爬长城
我在周末的时候天气晴天在家跟姐姐一起打篮球。In the weekends when the weather is sunny I play basketball with my sister at home.当周末，天气晴朗的时候，我会在家跟我的姐姐一起打篮球

学中文。Hi everyone is my sentence structure and grammar correct on these sentences?

大家好，
I am writing to my 笔友 pen pals in Chinese and am trying to perfect my sentence structures. Please would be so kind as to give me some advice on my writing.
谢谢你们！

我说中文说得不太好，所以我想每天练说。I speak chinese not too well, so I want to practice speaking everyday.
虽然学外国语很难，但是我对汉语兴趣因为你也学漂亮的中国人，中文和文化。although learning a foreign language is difficult, I am interested in Chinese because you also learn about the beautiful Chinese people, language and culture. 虽然学外国语很难，但是我对汉语还是有兴趣，因为你也可以了解漂亮的中国人，学习中文和文化
我也想去因为我想连听和说汉语，和中国爬长城。I also want to go (to china) because I want to practice listening and speaking and I want to climb the Great Wall. 我也想去中国，因为我想练习听说能力，我也想要爬长城。
我在周末的时候天气晴天在家跟姐姐一起打篮球。In the weekends when the weather is sunny I play basketball with my sister at home. 在周末天气好的时候，我会和我姐姐在家里打篮球。

学中文。Hi everyone is my sentence structure and grammar correct on these sentences?

大家好，
I am writing to my 笔友in Chinese and am trying to perfect my sentence structures. Please would be so kind as to give me some advice on my writing.
谢谢你们！

我说中文说得不太好，所以我想每天练说。I speak chinese not too well, so I want to practice speaking everyday.
虽然学外国语很难，但是我对汉语感兴趣，因为你能同时了解学漂亮的中国人，优美的中文语言和文化。although learning a foreign language is difficult, I am interested in Chinese because you also learn about the beautiful Chinese people, language and culture.
我也还想去中国，因为我想连练习听和说汉语，和中国爬长城。I also want to go (to china) because I want to practice listening and speaking and I want to climb the Great Wall.
我在周末的时候，如果天气晴天朗，我会在家跟姐姐一起打篮球。In the weekends when the weather is sunny I play basketball with my sister at home.

学中文。Hi everyone is my sentence structure and grammar correct on these sentences?

大家好，
I am writing to my 笔友in Chinese and am trying to perfect my sentence structures. Please would be so kind as to give me some advice on my writing.
谢谢你们！

我说中文说得不太好，所以我想每天练说。I speak chinese not too well, so I want to practice speaking everyday.
虽然学外国语很难，但是我对汉语有兴趣。因为你们中国人很漂亮。although learning a foreign language is difficult, I am interested in Chinese because you also learn about the beautiful Chinese people, language and culture.
我想去中国。因为我想练习说汉语，去中国爬长城。I also want to go (to china) because I want to practice listening and speaking and I want to climb the Great Wall.
我在周末，天气晴的时候，在家跟姐姐一起打篮球。In the weekends when the weather is sunny I play basketball with my sister at home.