Hi from the States! 😊
Great job! My corrections are below in red.
For me, American Fast food <s>just</s> meant something delicious, but forbidden <s>banned</s> <s>from eating</s> in my childhood. It was not until I left my hometown, a small, country town in <s>to </s>Beijing, for my college, that I began to feel a special connection with fast food.
Beijing is a super crowded and noisy, modern city with shining, glass surface skyscrapers' <s>glass surface shining</s>. Everything<s>'s</s> <s>changing</s> changes so fast here that what you see now can be totally different one week later. Also, the city is filled with <s>there are</s> <s>so many</s> talented people all who intensely compete <s>competing</s> for scholarships and jobs. I used to think I was the greatest girl in the world <s>while </s>until I realized I was not "special" at all at that moment. I was depressed for nearly one year.
Food can be quite expensive in Beijing. Actually, everything is expensive there. The McDonald's near my campus is probably <s>maybe</s> the cheapest place to go and eat. <s>and feed myself.</s> Each McDonald’s meal costs me no more than $2. The McMuffins and cheese hamburgers are my favorite things to eat there.
What makes a fast food store special? <s>Why I feel special about fast food store is that</s> Every time I walk in, I’m struck by the safe, familiar, and friendly atmosphere. Outside the store, the world can be so cruel and harsh. I find myself needing to remember to keep strong to deal with the endless difficulties that lay beyond the comfort of the store. The yellow light inside the store, the smell<s>ing</s> of chips and the clerk’s greeting make me feel at ease <s>relax,</s> giving me a break from my pressure and loneliness. I can just enjoy the food, and enjoy the moment. Sometimes, I go to get fast food with my friends. We try something new on the menu, share our food, gossip, and laugh.
<s>In a word</s>, As you can see, fast food <s>store</s> means much more than food to me. There are lots of memories. <s>there.</s>