It was afternoon and everyone was busy enjoying the festival, some people were dancing and some were eating their meals. The weather didn't look so good, rain was about to start. I started feeling like something bad was gonna going to happen and I heard the noise coming from far away. It was actually earthquake noise (the noises of an earthquake) and nobody heard that noise because they all were all too busy in with the festival. It was too late and I couldn't do nothing (could do nothing or couldn't do anything)abrubtly when the earthquake abruptly came. Men, women, and children were running and the whining noises of everyone was all over the place lastly,everyone was put to rest in piece(lols) . The whole place was destroyed and everything was ruined. I was on the ground feeling unconcious, my head was spinning. No one was alive, nothing was left except a piece of small paper ,which was left folded on the ground near me when I opened it ..... and saw something that stunned me. In it was written: "YOU ARE DREAMING". I woke up and **********.
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the fair of my town My town's fair
This weekend is my town's fair, Zempoala Hidalgo in México city. We are celebrating the Virgin of Refuge. In the streets have businesses (by businesses do you mean venders?) venders of food, clothing and accessorie. People(or you can say everyone goes) go to Zempoala to buy, to eat, to dance and to see the town theater.
