the fair of my town
this weekend is the fair of my town, Zempoala Hidalgo in México city.
we celebrate the Virgin of refuge.
in the streets have businesses of food, clothing and accessories
all people going to zempoala to buy and eat too goign to dance and see of town theater.
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ok thanks for helped me
could you help me with my English?
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This was really nice to read! One of the problems you had was the order of words that indicate possession: my town's fair versus the fair of my town. That word order switch always trips romance language speakers.
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the fair of my town My town's fair
This weekend is my town's fair, Zempoala Hidalgo in México city.
We are celebrating the Virgin of Refuge.
In the streets have businesses (by businesses do you mean venders?) venders of food, clothing and accessorie.
People(or you can say everyone goes) go to Zempoala to buy, to eat, to dance and to see the town theater.
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