Birds

Have you known that birds in summer as hungry as in winter? As for me, I thought that it's much easier for birds to find food in summer. However, last week a bird came to my manger. (I have a manger behind my window, see photo). So, I put there a few slices of bread there. Since that time I've begun to give them food every day. And now they are no longer afraid of me and they even eat peas from my hand.

Thank you for corrections in advance :)

Correction:

Birds
Did you know that birds in summer are as hungry as in winter? As for me, I thought that it's much easier for birds to find food in summer. However, last week a bird came to my manger. (I have a manger behind my window, see photo). So, I put there a few slices of bread there. Since then I've begun to give them food every day. And now they are no longer afraid of me and they even eat peas from my hand.

Almost completely perfect. No spelling mistakes or punctuation errors. Just a few minor corrections. You're doing really well here, keep it up :)

guilin my hometown

i like living in my hometown,because the air is fresh ,the sky is blue,and can listen the vioce of frogs when i sleeping

Guilin: My Hometown

I like living in my hometown because the air is fresh, the sky is blue and I can listen to the voice of frogs when I am sleeping.

你尝试得好极了。你以后写英语词"and"，你不需要写逗点。我希望改正帮助你。:)

Drunk man

Drunk man usually doesn't admit that he is drunk. Drunk man often becomes angry immediately when he heard his friends said he was drunk. Drunk man often tells the truth that he won't expose if he didn't drink a lot. There is a famous cross talk about two drunk men in china. One person boasted he was not afraid of doing everything in the world. Another then turned on a flashlight and asked him if he could to climb up on the top of the beam of the light. The boasting drunk man looked up on the beam, stuttering wisely:
" I know what you mean.
I climb,
climb up finally.
Then you turn off the light.

So I fell down!".

The Drunk Man
The drunk man usually doesn't admit that he is drunk. The drunk man often became angry immediately when he heard his friends said he was drunk. The drunk man often tells the truth that he won't expose himself if he doesn't drink a lot. There is a famous cross talk about two drunk men in China. One person boasted he was not afraid of doing everything in the world. Another then turned on a flashlight and asked him if he could to climb up on the top of the beam of the light. The boasting drunk man looked up on the beam, stuttering wisely:
" I know what you mean.
I climb,
climb up finally.
Then you turn off the light.

So I fell down!".

Haha, 我真喜欢你的故事。Your English is virtually perfect, apart from the fact I would say that it makes more sense to use a "determiner" (the definite article "the") in front of a noun phrase like this e.g "the happy man" "the desperate woman" etc...
Also, you should use capital letters when referring to a country, also with the title.

Great entry however :)