guilin my hometown

i like living in my hometown,because the air is fresh ,the sky is blue,and can listen the vioce of frogs when i sleeping

Guilin: My Hometown

I like living in my hometown because the air is fresh, the sky is blue and I can listen to the voice of frogs when I am sleeping.

你尝试得好极了。你以后写英语词"and"，你不需要写逗点。我希望改正帮助你。:)