Who picks up the check?

In China, The boy guys always pay for everything when a couple goes on a date.  If he doesn't, they it will be considered to be impolite or rude  not gentle.  I'm wondering who picks up the check in western countries, the boy or the girl?  Or Do they just need to pay for their own tab their part of themselves.

You can also say "In China, the male always pays for everything when a couple goes on a date".

The last sentence can also be written as such, "Do they just need to pay for their own, separate ticket".

My corrections are colloquial.  Generally, this is how people speak.

At the restaurant

Waiter:  Good afternoon!  Would you like something to eat?
Jane:  I would like to try some a traditional British meal.
Sam:  I advise you to try the roast beef.  It’s delicious here.
Jane:  What do you think?  OK, I don’t mind.  Roast beef with chips, please.
Sam:  And the same for me the same.  So two roast beefs with chips.
Waiter:  OK, anything else?
Sam:  No, thank you.
Waiter:  Would you like something to drink?
Jane:  Some wine, please. (Maybe you can say, "A glass of wine, please" OR "I'd like a bottle of your best wine." OR "I'd like some wine" but usually you have to be more specific about the type of wine because restaurants tend to have more than one type of wine.)
Sam:  And some a beer for me.

Chinese Culture

Chinese kung fu is one of stems from the heritage of Chinese culture.  I am a student and martial arts enthusiast.  I like foreigners.

Sincerely,

Frank

OR you can say it like this because I'm not sure what you mean by "I like foreigners sincere, frank.":

Chinese kung fu stems from the heritage of Chinese culture.  I am a student and martial arts enthusiast.  I sincerely like foreigners.

Frank.

My Desires

Last night, I was thinking about the trip I made to Mérida and suddenly it came to my mind me how the desires of my heart have become so real to me.

When I was a little girl, 'Snow White' was my favorite princess. and I remember dreaming of being in Disney World and seeing the 'Sleeping Beauty' castle.  Many years later, I visited Disney World once again.  Oh my!  I was like a kid, jumping up and down.

As a young teenager, I wanted to live in a country where I could see the experience all four seasons. and Even though it didn’t happen back then, I had the opportunity to live in Utah.

After having ugly cars for several years (second hand of course), the day I had the chance was given the opportunity to buy a brand new car.  there My wish finally came true.  I purchased a small, blue car.  just as It was what I always wanted.  (You can also say, "It was what I always dreamed of.")

A few days ago, I visited Mérida for the first time.  I can't believe it!  here Just a few hours from my hometown and I have never ever I was been able to go there, but I wished so bad to see the beauty of the this country site of this city.  Well, I was delighted to be there.  It was as I thought just as I expected.  Sometimes pictures can lie but this place it is exactly as the way I have seen it in post cards.

Please don't get me wrong.  I am not a materialistic person.  I have spiritual desires that but due to their nature, I don't feel like sharing them.  but Just to mention one thing though, I recall when I was a missionary for the LDS church.  I dreamed to be in the presence of the prophet and other general authorities.  Guess what? and That also happened.  What else can I say?  I am blessed.  I am happy.

Tired!

I've I got a cold yesterday and now i'm still feeling terrible.  Headache, cold.......  How can i finish my class with it?

a tough question

1.Lying on the couch, the boy fell asleep
2.The boy fell asleep, lying on the couch
3.The boy fell asleep lying on the couch

are they all correct?
How to fix them?

Number 1 is correct.  You need the comma and you also need a period at the end.

Number 2 is correct.  You might or might not need the comma (depending who you ask, I've had teachers tell me both are correct) and you also need a period at the end.  In this case, I don't think the comma is required.

Number 3 is the same as number 2 without the comma.

Engliss Class

Hi all everyone :)

My English class is very extremely boring because my teacher is old person.  She always talks slow talk and she doesn't do nothing anything interesting.  Everyday, I go to my English class but I'm not very excited for this.  I really need to learn more English, so I think I need to find change the a different teacher.

What do you think? ;)

My Friend

My friend Fabiola is One of my best friends is Fabiola.  I have knew known her for many years but despite that, we don't see each other very frequently often.  We always think that we are friends.

She My friend Fabiola is has medium height, is a bit overweight and she has short, fair, curly hair.
She works as a social worker and I think she is very good at her job. because She loves helping everyone people.

She is very sensible, reliable and sincere.  In fact, when she thinks someone doesn't act as she or he must the way they should, she is able to say that isn't well.  For that reason, some people think that feel she is acts a little unfriendly.  However, I believe she is an honest person.

Fabiola lives in the country and grows aromatic plants.  She also she likes animals and she felt feels very unhappy when her dog goes missing missed.

On the other hand Inspite of her good traits, Fabiola is quite untidy and always puts every things in all the wrong places.  On the other hand, her husband is very tidy.  so that I think they have this might cause them to argue sometimes.

Please, I need someone to correct this entry write.  

I'm not sure I understand what you're saying in blue highlighted sections.

"On the other hand" can be used when stating an opposing view on something mentioned previously.  A good example is the second sentence in the last paragraph.  First you mentioned Fabiola is not very tidy.  So to show the opposing view, you can use "On the other hand", and then state your view.  "Fabiola is quite untidy.  On the other hand, her husband is very tidy."