My Friend

My friend Fabiola is One of my best friends is Fabiola.  I have knew known her for many years but despite that, we don't see each other very frequently often.  We always think that we are friends.

She My friend Fabiola is has medium height, is a bit overweight and she has short, fair, curly hair.
She works as a social worker and I think she is very good at her job. because She loves helping everyone people.

She is very sensible, reliable and sincere.  In fact, when she thinks someone doesn't act as she or he must the way they should, she is able to say that isn't well.  For that reason, some people think that feel she is acts a little unfriendly.  However, I believe she is an honest person.

Fabiola lives in the country and grows aromatic plants.  She also she likes animals and she felt feels very unhappy when her dog goes missing missed.

On the other hand Inspite of her good traits, Fabiola is quite untidy and always puts every things in all the wrong places.  On the other hand, her husband is very tidy.  so that I think they have this might cause them to argue sometimes.

Please, I need someone to correct this entry write.  

I'm not sure I understand what you're saying in blue highlighted sections.

"On the other hand" can be used when stating an opposing view on something mentioned previously.  A good example is the second sentence in the last paragraph.  First you mentioned Fabiola is not very tidy.  So to show the opposing view, you can use "On the other hand", and then state your view.  "Fabiola is quite untidy.  On the other hand, her husband is very tidy."

My friend

My friend Fabiola is one of my best friends. I have known her for many years but despite not seeing each other very frequently we always think of each other as friends.
She is medium height and a bit overweight, and she has short fair curly hair.
She works as a social worker and I think she is very good at her job because she loves helping everyone.

She is very sensible (sensitive?), reliable and sincere. In fact, when she thinks someone isn't acting as she or he should she is able to say that it isn't okay. For that reason some people think that she is a little unfriendly however I believe she is an honest person.

She lives in the country and grows aromatic plans. She also likes animals and she was very unhappy when her dog went missing.

Please I need someone to correct this writing.

On the other hand, she is quite untidy and always puts everything everywhere, but her husband is very tidy so I think they have to argue sometimes.

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