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- Attending college Essay topic: People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university? People have a lot of reasons to attend college or university. I am the one who believe why they do that is to prepare for future job, as well as broaden their knowledge about themselves and the world around them. It is obviously that everyone must do a job to live. In modern society, people would like to have a good job so that they can enjoy life fulfilled. For this, attending college or university give them a good preparation for a future job. People learn skills in college and they can compete better in a competitive world today. Many jobs require specific knowledge that only be taught in college or university. In addition to that, employers also asked for a determined qualification provided by a college or university. Beside looking for a preparation for a job, by coming to college, people get knowledge with simple aim of broadening knowledge in their interests. They find happiness in discovering human being's knowledge. Knowledge and its applications are always factors that help people live in a high level life. So people come to college to have a fulfill life. To conclude, I would like to recommend that people should attend college or university. Having knowledge so that they can define who they want to be. It is a good way for them to prepare better for their future job.June 26, 201310
- Happiness Essay topic: Happiness is considered very important in our file. Why it is difficult to define? What factors are in achieving happiness? It has been widely noted that happiness is very important in our life. However, what is happiness? It seems difficult to define, for different people have different ideas. Some people obtain happiness from seeking fame and profit. Others feel happy when they help people. From my point of view, achieving happiness is a relentless pursuit. We feel happy when we obtain our goal. However, a new goal always appear and we continue sparing no effort to obtain it to get satisfied. There is no limit to gaining lasting happiness. Then how to achieve happiness? I think happiness can be brought by various way. Some of them can be the following ways: Firstly, working can bring us happiness. When we finish a target in our job, we feel satisfied. A good result always a miracle way to us physically and mentally. Happiness from job is an achievement we got after a patient and hard effort. Secondly, happiness come from our favor we do for other people. We usually feel happy when we give help to other people. Seeing happiness of people who receive our help always return us a good and comfortable sense. Last but not least, to achieve happiness, we need to keep our attitude optimistic. We should enjoy the good aspects in our life and think positive so that we can realize the existence of happiness. All in all, happiness is obviously important in our life. A good way to obtain it is to keep our mentality and physicality both strong.June 24, 201350
IELTS Task 2
Hello, English is not my mother language but I want to add a comment to help edit your essay. It could be wrong, but I think it is also a good way to learn, right? Let some native English user correct your essay, and the following is just my opinion.
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
Many people guess that involving the price of gas is important for environment and solving problem OF traffic jams, but others do not agree with increasing cost of petrol. I will look at different point of view.
Today some people think that they have to SAVE environment. Moreover, they guess that if they INCREASE the price of gasoline, they will help for nature and decrease traffic jams in city. BeSides, government should SOLVE problems OF traffic jams because people spend a large amount of time for staying there. I think that the most popular SOLUTION to decreasING traffic jams and savING nature is integration OF bikes in infrastructure of the city. Government should create system for safety of bikers, who prefer ridING a bike THAN usING a car. It is a great idea for big cities because people will get empty road and improvE level of health BY riding on bike IN GOOD ENVIRONMENT.
On the other hand, we can see that if government INCREASE the price of gas, there will CAUSE new problems. For example, price of ticket for trip IS MORE EXPENSIVE. Also, it influencT world's economY. Some people guess that all area depend on the price of petrol for barrel. I believe that government can create another decision of solving problem OF traffic jams and pollution.
In conclusion I can say that today the most important problems are pollution and traffic jams in the bid cities. In my opinion people should save the nature and choose bike. Also, involving price of gasoline is not good idea. The argument we have presented that solving these will have a huge influence on nature and life of people.
You can help me if you will use IELTS Writing Mark Schemes
http://www.examenglish.com/IELTS/IELTS_Writing_MarkSchemes.html0 votedJune 11, 20130- Opaque We all sometimes have no force to do anything. We’re fed up with doing same things day after day in current situation. However, remember that there is a common force that drives most of us: we want to be successful. No matter what we are being faced with, we should establish a relevant spirit, a certain motivation, and right actions to get ahead in life. We often wonder why some people are so much more successful than others. We always grab any information that is so called ‘Secret of successes’. We jump into any story which is disclosed from success. How can we get the key to success? Have you ever tried to imitate the path of experienced men? Have you ever made an inner comparison with them? Some people even state that if they could live in a suitable circumstance they can get successful. It’s surely not although we could share the same feeling sometime in our tough lives. Circumstance can be a big guy that can help you or prevent you attaining the achievement, but never been a deciding factor. Our natural ability itself can be good friend when we need to overcome matter, but not yourself. The key here to win over obstacle, in my opinion, is simply our view. Our view should toward the goal and from that view; we push all your energy and enemy focus on the goal. We should take care and make sure that the progress is on the right way. It can be said that you’re stable when you try to be enthusiastic. You’ll be either self-discipline or self-fish. You can have either team-spirit or just crowd-mind.June 11, 201310
- An increase in crime has been blamed on violent images on television and in computer and video games Mane people hold the belief that violent images on television and in computer and video games has caused an increase in crime. I am the one who strongly agree with that opinion because of the following reason. Firstly, images on television have a big impact to human's brain. People has a tendency to imitate what goes on television. There are many popular TV programs which contain violent movies. That means when people feel familiar with crime, they don't pay enough attention on how to prevent crime. Secondly, computer and video games lead the people to a virtual world that every actions can be possible. It's a dangerous situation when the people try to be some characters in the game, and they form the game scenario by killing others. Moreover, living too much with virtual world in games, people lose human interaction. They don't care too much about social standard. It seems to be that they easily break the rule and get involved in crime. From my point of view, we can prevent people from getting involved in crime by reducing violent images appear in public media. We should categorize television program and computer and video games in order to strictly provide those things to people. In addition to managing the cause, we should improve security action such as organizing crime prevention education for local people, or reporting suspicious people in local area. Finally, although there are many reasons can cause the crime, we should reduce violent images as much as possible. We should lead the people to goodness so that the people can be accustomed to the favor. The less people see the crime, the less people are involved in crime.June 6, 201340
