Could you please correct my mistakes? Essay (CAE)

How has modern technology change the world?

Nobody would dispute that nowadays technology plays an immense role in people's lives. Therefore, it is natural that modern society notices effects from the daily use of technological devices. Thus, the purpose of this essay is to define which area / sector / part  of life has experienced the impact of modern gadgets the most.

The first area where these ubiquitous tools, in particular the internet, cannot go unnoticed is undoubtedly the human communication. Nowadays  These days, most of people's socialisation happens on the Internet, via messengers and video calls. Arguably this is handy for interaction between acquaintances and colleagues, as this gives an opportunity to exchange information quickly and practically around the clock / with no time constraints  on 24 hour basis.

On the other hand, according to most researchers, this approach is completely inappropriate for creating profound relationships and long-lasting bonds, which require a greater emotional input. And Unfortunately, it turns out that today's technology ruled world makes it more and more difficult for young people to find a partner. Moreover, some of them are so absorbed by this new virtual world that they find romantic relationships pointless, as from their point of view, they cannot compete with the pleasures and freedom that virtual communication gives them.

Summing up / In summary, without any doubt the impact of modern technology on today's society is simultaneously positive and negative. However, I believe that what requires greater attention to a greater extent is the way the Internet and gadgets affect human relationships, as it entails such serious consequences there are serious consequences such as, declining birth rate and the overall solitude of the population.

Lesson in Ikebana

I have started to take lessons in Ikebana recently. Ikebana is the Japanese style of flower arrangement. I like  fresh flowers, but I like dry flowers more! So I hang flowers before they become old. I succeeded at it, I’m glad:)

It is correct. It may sound strange to you as the object is missing in the second half i.e. it may seem more natural to say " I may not be the smartest student but I am one of the hardest working students." :-)

My cat, Vito!

Oh! He's so cute, in this at the moment he's sleeping next to me and I can't move me because he might wake up! He's almost 11 months old and his name is Vito! The only bad thing about him is that he always wakes me up at 4:30 am...it's very early. But all the ways it doesn't matter as I love him so much! Or... But I still love him anyway.

Receipt  Recipe? for richness

How to do you find your own way in life? It's very simple: just turn off all electronic devices and all gadgets for 2-3 days. Don't speak to anybody, listen to your heart, it will tells you the right way, your own way.
It's even not (even) just about money, it's about results. Think globally. Create ideas that will change the world.
Do what you love, with passion, with madness.

But first you gotta overfight have to push yourself.
Tell me how you did it.

Never seen or heard of biggo and smallo but lame-o is an insult used to talk about someone who is uncool or unoriginal e.g. "he has terrible trainers. What a lame-o". This is a bit outdated now but still used with the younger generation in the UK. Weirdo is used quite regularly in the UK too among all ages (I use this word everday :-) ), the definition is the same as Lisa has stated above. Hope this helps?

It means you are trying to force something upon someone or persuade them to do something they may not want to do. It has negative connotations usually. I hope that helps?

Try Your Best to be Perfect Whatever You Do

Today, our studio was recruiting someone to work in position of programme host.

I saw many girls come here to wait and to be tried out. Many of them are beautiful looking and are in stylish/fashionable clothes.

When they present to camera, some of them are being nervous and stammer, finding it hard to speak out any of entire sentences from begin to the end, even if they have trained by related lessons on a related course. To be frank, they are short of confidence,strong and firm, if to do so  they had it I suppose they can would perform much better.

Even when I went to the loo, I heard a girl call for her friend to send her an English introduce  introduction of herself!!! I don't know why she didn't prepeared it in advance at home. It's a common thing that to prepeared a piece of to introduce yourself when you're accepting taking an exam.

I hope they will be luck and I tell myself : the first step into success is that as much as you can prepear things.