Today our studio recruited some new employees to work as program hosts.

I saw many girls waiting to be auditioned; they looked wonderful and had stylish clothes.

During the recording in front of the camera, some of them became nervous; they stammered, found it hard to speak and didn't complete their sentences, despite having the relevant training. Being honest, many of them lacked confidence, although I feel many of them would have performed far better if they had been more assertive.

In the toilets, I overheard a girl calling her friend to send her an English CV of herself. I can't imagine why she hadn't prepared this in advance. It's only normal to prepare a CV when you are going for an interview.

I wish them luck and reflected: preparation is the key to success.

ps. i hope i've interpreted this correctly let me know if you had intended any other meanings, e.g. introduce - cv

Try Your Best to be Perfect Whatever You Do

Today, our studio was recruiting someone to work in position of programme host.

I saw many girls come here to wait and to be tried out. Many of them are beautiful looking and are in stylish/fashionable clothes.

When they present to camera, some of them are being nervous and stammer, finding it hard to speak out any of entire sentences from begin to the end, even if they have trained by related lessons on a related course. To be frank, they are short of confidence,strong and firm, if to do so  they had it I suppose they can would perform much better.

Even when I went to the loo, I heard a girl call for her friend to send her an English introduce  introduction of herself!!! I don't know why she didn't prepeared it in advance at home. It's a common thing that to prepeared a piece of to introduce yourself when you're accepting taking an exam.

I hope they will be luck and I tell myself : the first step into success is that as much as you can prepear things.

Try Your Best to be Perfect Whatever You Do

Today, our studio was recruiting someone who to work in the position of programme host.

I saw many girls come here to wait to be auditioned. Many of them were beautiful-looking and are in fashionable clothes.

When they were recorded facing the camara, some of them are being became nervous and stammered uncontrollably as they spoke out any of entire the sentences from beginning to the end, even if they had training from appropriate lessons. To be frank, they were short of confidence, strong and firm definitely and absolutley, so if to do so they had had such confidence, I suppose they could have performed much better.

Even when I visited to the ladies', I heard a girl call for her friend, asking for to send her an introduction of herself in English!!! I don't know why she hadn't prepared one in advance at home. It's a common practice that one prepares an of introductory piece when one accepting an exam faces an interview. 

I hope they will be wish them luck and I tell myself: the first step into success is that as much as you can prepear things only as far as you have prepared yourself.

Hope the corrections help! Feel free to ask about any of them; in some cases you were perfetcly understandable, but the phasing was unnatural or the choice of word was not fully appropriate. :)