A lead article of the first issue of a travel magazine. Here is my lead article of the first issue of a travel magazine. just ignore the format first ^^ can somebody edit it for me? Why start a magazine? A question I asked myself several times. The answer is simple, there is a movement underfoot. This new magazine will be providing the articles and travel stories from both professional travelers and ordinary tourists just like you! The later issues will be giving ideas of dream destinations and hopefully they can inspire you. One of the most exciting feelings in the world for me is when I step off and airplane or any forms of transportation, in another different place. Instantly, butterflies start fluttering in my stomach with the excitement and the adventures that are about to begin. I can’t think of any other feeling can compare with it of going a travelling. You probably know the feeling. When you are on vacation, you can feel this certain kind of freedom. Young people do travelling for different reasons from that of adults; finding excitement and educational purpose are probably the two main reasons. Traveling or seeing places is an important part of our education. One cannot believe a fact to be true unless one sees it. The education that young people receive from schools now does not provide clear knowledge or idea of place. The excitement of seeing an unfamiliar place and experiencing an unlike culture is not something you can acquire from a paper book. I took on a trip to Maldives last year. I was entranced by the fish around the reef; I couldn't even believe what had seen under the azure sea. Before this trip, I had never known that our world can be beautiful like this. Not only relaxes myself from intense daily life, this trip also gave me a clear idea that our world is much broader and magnificent we think. A visit to a place imparts practical knowledge of important places, persons, things and the nature heritages. The vision of and individual becomes enlarged just as by sitting at a small place makes one’s vision narrow. One cannot appreciate the work of art created by master hands unless one visit places and things. To go travelling is always full of a surprise. Breathtaking views you dreamed before, bustling street and delicious food you always want to discover, besides them, you always have opportunities get to know new friends and build relationships. ‘Escaping’ from parent itself is exciting enough, plus experiencing an exotic country or renowned landscapes cannot be even better.

Tense about relative clause.关系从句的时态问题 I was doing some practice about relative clause, and there was sentence said: Pablo Picasso had a daughter, Paloma, whose fashion designs have become famous worldwide. Why not 'whose fashion designs had become famous worldwide'？ 主句时态是过去时，为什么从句时态还是have呢？不是应该往后推一个时态变成过去完成时吗？

can somebody edit it for me? Here is my letter to the editor on the topic 'media violence' just ignore the format first ^^ can somebody edit it for me? http://www.italki.com/entry/347038

LETTER TO THE EDITOR ABOUT 'MEDIA VIOLENCE' Here is my letter to the editor on the topic 'media violence' just ignore the format first ^^ can somebody edit it for me? I have read through the article regarding the media violence, as an eight-year-old child’s mother, I notice that increasing number of violent and inappropriate content shown on the television and I am concerned about this phenomenon. Media has become a part of everyone’s life, television is one of the major influences in a child’s development, and it can serve a positive, educational role. Yet, with the explosion of technology and even nearly all the media access that come along with it, violence is becoming harder to avoid. It is difficult for us, as parents, to prevent our children expose to the inappropriate content. I have witnessed my own child watched a cartoon in which had characters held the gun and shot each other, and shouting bad words, the next day I heard him saying exactly the same bad words to his friends. It is hardly worthy of belief that he spends nearly 5 hours with media every day, that’s even more time that he spends with me! This is definitely a potential risk. The problem is that high proportions of media, including television programmes, movies, video games or even books, have some depictions of violence. It is widely agreed that children and adolescents can imitate the violence they see on television; heavy exposure to violent media can be a risk factor for violent behaviour. To reduce media violence, as parent, we can make a choice to consistently expose our kids to the stuff that doesn't suitable in the media. The government should also take responsibilities and be in charge of this serious issue of media violence, programmes on TV and other forms of media should be classified according to the content and suitable age. Action is needed, and must be quick.