A lead article of the first issue of a travel magazine.

Here is my lead article of the first issue of a travel magazine.
just ignore the format first ^^ can somebody edit it for me?

Why start a magazine? A question I asked myself several times. The answer is simple, there is a movement underfoot. This new magazine will be providing the articles and travel stories from both professional travelers and ordinary tourists just like you! The later issues will be giving ideas of  for dream destinations and hopefully they can inspire you.

One of the most exciting feelings in the world for me is when I step off and airplane or any forms of transportation, in another different place. Instantly, butterflies start fluttering in my stomach with the excitement and the adventures that are about to begin. I can’t think of any other feeling can compare with it that of going a travelling. You probably know the feeling. When you are on vacation, you can feel this certain kind of freedom.
Young people do go travelling for different reasons from that of adults; finding excitement and educational purpose are probably the two main reasons. Traveling or seeing places is an important part of our education. One cannot believe a fact to be true unless one sees it. The education that young people receive from schools now does not provide clear knowledge or ideas of foreign places. The excitement of seeing an unfamiliar place and experiencing a different culture is not something you can acquire from a paper book.

I took on a trip to Maldives last year. I was entranced by the fish around the reef; I couldn't even believe what had seen saw under the azure sea. Before this trip, I had never known that our world can be  this beautiful like this. Not It not only relaxed me myself from intense daily life, this trip also gave me a clear idea that our world is much broader and more magnificent we think. A visit to a place imparts practical knowledge of important places, persons, things and the natural heritages. The vision of and individual becomes enlarged just as by sitting at a small place makes one’s vision narrow. One cannot appreciate the work of art created by master hands unless one visit places and things. 

To go travelling is always full of a surprise. Breathtaking views you dreamed before, bustling street and delicious food you always want to discover, besides them, you always have opportunities get to know new friends and build relationships. ‘Escaping’ from your parents itself is exciting enough, plus experiencing an exotic country or renowned landscapes cannot be even better.

Young travellers, stop being armchair travellers. Pack your bags, and get out. Pick a dream destination from this inspiring brand new magazine and set off!

Missyh, great writing! I especially like the sentence in italics. If you have more articles and would like some feedback, you can email them to me - [email protected]. Keep up the good work. John.