I am a native speaker, and the answer you were given also has mistakes. Let me give you what my version of this would be: Introduction Today I'm going to talk about the International Islamic University Malaysia (IIUM) . First of all, I chose to talk about IIUM because I noticed that many other students chose to discuss restaurants, so I wanted to talk about something different. To start off, I will talk about the establishment of IIUM. It was founded in 1983 with the support of Saudi Arabia, Pakistan, Turkey, and Bangladesh. Now I will show you some pictures of the university. IIUM has many buildings. As you can see here, we have the entrance to the university along with security personnel. This is the university interface [not sure what you mean by "interface", I think you might be using the wrong word here] and in addition, here is a picture of the university rector. -End- So this is what I have best understood from your introduction. I took the liberty to rewrite some parts based on what I thought you were trying to say. Sorry this came so late, but I've only recently joined this site. Anyway, hopefully this helps.