I am not a native speaker but i'll try to help you as far as i can,, Hi everyone In fact, my teacher asks us to prepare some informations about amazing places you have visited with some pictures of the place. I have written an essay about (International Islamic University of Malaysia) so, i want someone's correction to mine (the essay) Introduction Today, i am going to talk about (IIUM) International Islamic University of Malaysia. First of all, i choose to talk about it because .... ( i don't know the context what you want to talk to) The IIUM was founded in 1983 by the support of Saudi Arabia, Pakistan, Turkey, and Bangladesh. Now i will show you some pictures of the university. (i guess, we don't need "it's content" because we already know the context is the university) The IIUM has many buildings. let;s have some overviews. Here as you can see we have entrances to IIUM and the security officer (if you mean the person) stands there for inspection. This is university interface. And this is a pictures for university rector (i don't get what you mean about the words) The sequel will come to the second part.. I am not so expert about english, but i learn english from doing this and every correction i've made or by someone i keep it in my mind. So, im sorry if any mistakes in my correction. I suggest, you should write something like correcting a writting in Notebook section. Someone would be gladly to help you.

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I am a native speaker, and the answer you were given also has mistakes. Let me give you what my version of this would be: Introduction Today I'm going to talk about the International Islamic University Malaysia (IIUM) . First of all, I chose to talk about IIUM because I noticed that many other students chose to discuss restaurants, so I wanted to talk about something different. To start off, I will talk about the establishment of IIUM. It was founded in 1983 with the support of Saudi Arabia, Pakistan, Turkey, and Bangladesh. Now I will show you some pictures of the university. IIUM has many buildings. As you can see here, we have the entrance to the university along with security personnel. This is the university interface [not sure what you mean by "interface", I think you might be using the wrong word here] and in addition, here is a picture of the university rector. -End- So this is what I have best understood from your introduction. I took the liberty to rewrite some parts based on what I thought you were trying to say. Sorry this came so late, but I've only recently joined this site. Anyway, hopefully this helps.