虽然有时间，但是不学习

大家好，

今晚，我要写一篇作文，因为我好久没有寫 (need a verb here)。几个星期前，我成功通過 (succeed to pass)了所有的考试，所以现在放假了。我有很多时间，每天可以做很多事情，可是我什么也不想做。原因是什么？我最近很想学习语言，可是看起来我没有力气，我啥都不能做。因为我很想学汉语，所以我今天写这篇文章，希望我的中文写得好。如果你们看我犯错的话，你们就修改。 谢谢。 You are welcome.

Quite nice^^

丈夫的生日夜

上个星期我们俩在Ritz Carlton大阪度过了一个很愉快的夜晚。

室内的气氛很好，服务员的服務也好，还有料理也非常好，我们感动了。

他们给我丈夫准备了特别的蜡烛和甜点，他很吃惊了。

吃饭后，我送礼物給他。那个是Armani的衬衫，因为他喜欢这个品牌。他像满面春风的样子。 

Good vocab;D

回家以后，我们吃了我自己做的蛋糕。

这是黄油奶糖风味，原来我做甜点做得不好，所以對味道沒有信心。

但是这个黄油奶糖蛋糕竟然很好吃。我们很满足，而且吃得很饱了。
我们过了非常充实的一日。

 

That's a good night^^ 

The meal in fact isn't that important. The most important thing is who you spend time with.

^^加油

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I am just an English learner so please correct me if I make mistakes; ) Thanks so much!

And I now just read the first few sentences. 

 

Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Do you disagree or disagree to the statement?

 

* Remember to capitalize 'I'

Personally, i I definitely agree to the statement "young people enjoy life more than older people do",.

Start a new sentence to enhance readability. 

in that i I believe the younger you are,the more possibilities you have of entertainment.

the higher probability

But you need not to be that complicated, simply:

I believe that the younger you are, the more entertainment you would have.

 

The latter is a way to enjoy life,however,it is not the only way.

Unclear: What do you mean by the latter?

Do you mean entertainment? 

We may classify things into the former and the latter; however, what we need to do first is to define them.

If you write barbarbarbar and entertainment and write 'the latter', the reader will know you are talking about entertainment. 

 

 

Keep it up^^

学好汉语要多少时间？ (Is this a question? If so, you need to use a question mark. But if you want to express your strong emotions, you can keep your exclamation mark.)

我学习汉语已经三年了，还是不够，不能说很简单的话。

Keep it up ;  ) I also need to brush up my Mandarin. ; pp

一个朋友常常说，我应该感觉惭愧，因为我住在中国两年了，还不可以说得流利。 / 流利地說中文。

我知道这是惭愧，因為我可以跟很多人练习汉语。

This is a shame? We won't write in this way. We usually write 'this is shameful' 這很慚愧 / 丟臉.

You need to have a connective here -- 'because因為'.

不过我也没有办法。

其实我的同学很少，而且他们不跟我說汉语。

>< >< You may invite them to do so.

所以我的汉语学习平台很少。

'很少' is a bit weird ; p I'm not so sure. Maybe you can use '不足'? It actually means the same thing. 

我学习以后打算叫在一个学校语言。

You mean teaching languages? 我打算在完成學習後在一所學校教語言。

 

不过如果汉语不太好，然后很难说话跟孩子们。

很難和(跟is also ok)孩子說話 / 很難和孩子溝通 (communicate)

 

这个情况有一点complex(複雜)，

 

虽然我在中国，我的社会不是中文说的。

community? 社區. 社會is just like society. 

我的社區不是以中文溝通的。

而且在武汉我发现另外的问题。

這句沒問題^^ You may insert a comma between 而且 and 在.

 

很多人说local 汉语。

They speak their dialects 方言? Would it be Cantonese 廣東話?

local dialects might be 當地方言。

普通话跟这个不太一样。

Yes, that's true. This would reduce the chance of Mandarin oral practice.

 

(我)快要参加汉语水平考试。每天学习生词，做句子。希望可以通过这个考试。

 

Wish you all the best in your coming exam ^^ Enjoy learning Chinese!!