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I am just an English learner so please correct me if I make mistakes; ) Thanks so much!
And I now just read the first few sentences.
Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Do you disagree or disagree to the statement?
* Remember to capitalize 'I'
Personally, i I definitely agree to the statement "young people enjoy life more than older people do",.
Start a new sentence to enhance readability.
in that i I believe the younger you are,the more possibilities you have of entertainment.
the higher probability
But you need not to be that complicated, simply:
I believe that the younger you are, the more entertainment you would have.
The latter is a way to enjoy life,however,it is not the only way.
Unclear: What do you mean by the latter?
Do you mean entertainment?
We may classify things into the former and the latter; however, what we need to do first is to define them.
If you write barbarbarbar and entertainment and write 'the latter', the reader will know you are talking about entertainment.
Keep it up^^
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