(¡Excelente! La mayoría de los cambios son de puntuación. Hay reglas, sin embargo es un asunto de gusto o estilo personal, también. En EE.UU se dice Folk Music, o más simple, Folk. Creo que es igual a Folklore.)
Hi everyone,
Today I would like to talk to you about my beautiful country, a place full of history, mystery, and in my opinion, one of the most beautiful places in the world, with all of its beaches, cities, and deserts as well as its music, food, traditions, and everything that makes Mexico what it is today. I love my country and one of the things I love most about it is the food. I really, really, really love food. I have not tasted food as delicious as Mexican food; let me tell you about tacos! My god, tacos are the best. If you have not tasted tacos then I would say you have not lived. We also have quesadillas, enchiladas, tortillas, beans, and hot sauce. I invite you to eat some of them; you won’t regret it.
And don’t forget the music. Some of the most well-known music here in Mexico includes Banda, Mariachi, and the one I love most, Folk. I love everything about Folk. It makes me feel alive, proud of my Mexico, and allows me to forget all my worries. Mexico has a lot of different types of music and most of them are very beautiful.
Mexico has some of the most beautiful landscapes (or scenery) in the world. One of my favorite places is Cancun. I have not been there but it is quite famous because of its beaches. The water is so clean, so pure, that words cannot describe it. It’s a magical place. We also have El Cañon del Sumidero in Chiapas, Las Pirámides de Teotihuacan in Mexico City, Barrancas de Cobre in Chihuahua, Pico de Orizaba, Grutas de García in Nuevo León – the list is endless. I could keep talking but there would be no end.
Well, that's a little bit about Mexico. You should really come and see all this beautiful places, you won't regret a thing. :)
