Killers in the Ocean

There are 5 Oceans in this planet.They are Pacific Ocean, Atlantic Ocean, Indian Ocean, Southern Ocean aka Antarctic Ocean and the Arctic Ocean. There are millions of creatures that live in those five oceans which is well known as the largest animal system. Fishes, whales, dolphins, sharks, octopus and cocodiles. Some of them are friendly and never attack human being. But like the shark, crocodile and grampus always attack humans. For them, humans is just a sort of food. Even if it is dangerous to stay with them, but you still have to explore the mysterious oceans because those friendly, colorful and credible creatures have been waiting so long for humans to visit.
For visiting oceans, my first priority is learning to be able to swim.

 

Sentences just need fixing up like some words that you need to include to make your sentences to make sense. Also when using commas, you use them right except when it is the last word. When you don't use a comma for that last word, you always have to put "and" before it as it will signify that it is the last word from that list. Also human needs a "s" because you are describing a whole race, not a person for you will need a name for that. 

All in all, you just need more practise and you'll be fine :)

 

What i want from italki

I want learn english very well, more important for me speak english. I want to discuss any topic of conversation: about natural and interesting places in the world, maybe about work, cars and bikes. Early i tried to walk on the courses, but it was without results, i can't speak fluently, i speak very slowly, because courses in Russia is useless, but you can learn some grammar, i think its very bed (bad)...)) i need speak for my job, i work in very interest sphere: sales 3d printers. Its very popular in USA and is beginning development in Russia. I want to speak english to easily understand my college from US. Now i can't call them, but only through letters. I have never been in the US, i have seriously (seriously have) language barrier. This message i wrote without dictionary )))  (I also wrote this message without using a dictionary)
Waiting for comments))

  

i: Please, when using i, you must use capital I because you are talking about yourself and also, it is the correct term.

Your sentences need some correcting which is highlighted in orange.

But all in all, its not bad, but don't be discouraged. All you need is a few more practices and you'll be good...

 

It simply means that "bark" is just another word for the way he or she speaks. E.g like if a girl shouts at you, that simply means "bark". While "bite" is more like the way she or he acts. E.g like when a boy punches you, that's "bite". That phrase is just used metaphorically instead of having to lengthen a sentence which could put the reader off. Therefore that is why: "someone's bark is worse than his bite" is a sentence. It's just simply there to shorten a sentence that the writer might try to describe a character in the book, for the reader. And usually it's used for situations like an argument, fights, etc... (negative things) or maybe there is some meaning that may be positive but that's all I know. Hoped that helped :)

I am a New Zealander...

Born and kind of bred but I am quite fluent in my English

Hi, I am Relina and I can speak English fluently...

I hope you can teach me Chinese as I also want to learn that language :D

 

Hello!

Hi, my name is Nur Farhana.
Now I'm 18 years old and have finished school. I am still waiting for my university admission in June.
I live in Malaysia and I love it! :)
I've never travel abroad, :( and I hope I can do so.
I've (or I have) many friends but sometimes I forget their face or name when I have lost contact with them for a long time. I'm sorry. :(
I join italki.com to learn languages and your countries' culture. Please look forward on me. :)

Also try to read English books too. Since you must be a beginner, maybe start with the kids book as the vocabulary will be basic but it will also help as well to build other vocabulary in the future :)

Sorry, this is just an entry that I'm escribing myself on my first time on this site...

Egg in my country is also a slang for being a mischief :)