Killers in the Ocean
There are 5 Oceans in this planet.They are Pacific Ocean,Atlantic Ocean, Indian Ocean, Southern Ocean aka Antarctic Ocean, Arctic Ocean. There are millions creatures live in those five oceans which is well known as the largest animal system. Fishes, whales, dolphins, sharks, octopus, cocodile Some of them are friendly never attack human being. But like shark, crocodile, grampus always attack human. For them, human is just a sort of food. Even if it is dangerous to stay with them, but you still have to explore the mysterious oceans because those friendly, colorful, credible creatures have been waiting so long for human to visit.
For visiting oceans, my first priority is learning to be able to swim.
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Killers in the Ocean
There are 5 (five) oceans on this planet. They are the Pacific ,Atlantic , Indian , Southern aka Antarctic and Arctic Oceans. There are millions of creatures that live in those five oceans, which is well known as the largest animal system/habitat(?). Fishes, whales, dolphins, sharks, octopuses/octopi/octopodes and crocodiles. Some of them are friendly and never attack human beings. But like sharks, crocodiles and (grampus?) always often attack humans. For them, humans isare a just a sort/type of food. Even if it is dangerous to stay withbe near them, but you we should still have to explore the mysterious oceans because of those friendly, colorful and credible creatures that have been waiting so long for a human to visit/human contact.
Before visiting any ocean, my first priority is learning to be able to learn to swim.
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Killers in the Ocean
There are 5 Oceans in this planet.They are Pacific Ocean, Atlantic Ocean, Indian Ocean, Southern Ocean aka Antarctic Ocean and the Arctic Ocean. There are millions of creatures that live in those five oceans which is well known as the largest animal system. Fishes, whales, dolphins, sharks, octopus and cocodiles. Some of them are friendly and never attack human being. But like the shark, crocodile and grampus always attack humans. For them, humans is just a sort of food. Even if it is dangerous to stay with them, but you still have to explore the mysterious oceans because those friendly, colorful and credible creatures have been waiting so long for humans to visit.
For visiting oceans, my first priority is learning to be able to swim.
Sentences just need fixing up like some words that you need to include to make your sentences to make sense. Also when using commas, you use them right except when it is the last word. When you don't use a comma for that last word, you always have to put "and" before it as it will signify that it is the last word from that list. Also human needs a "s" because you are describing a whole race, not a person for you will need a name for that.
All in all, you just need more practise and you'll be fine :)
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