(204) I would like you to correct me if there are mistakes. Thanks!

Arriving at the infamous Women’s Federal Prison in Lexington was a real shock to me. I was petrified but settled down soon after bumping into experiencing unexpected and precious moments in which I realized God is still took taking care of me. The name “Renaissance” was on the cell given to me, not the rustic name “Blue Grass"(a music of South America the Southern United States) which was on most of the others.

The name meant ‘To be born again.’ It was only good enough to make me feel trusting God and being in a safe place.- This sentence is a bit akward to me. I'm not sure how to correct it so I'm going to type what I think you are trying to say. It made me feel like I was in a safe place and that I could trust God. or you could say It gave me assurance that I was in a safe place and that I could trust God. I just needed to learn more things to be truly reborn truly. The next day I was assigned to a workroom where people learned construction process how to contruct things or you could say how to build things. All we had to do was polish the floor by with thin leathers and glue construction materials onto it.

It is made This program is for inmates to acquire some skills available useful in the world when they return to society. A guard, Mr. Leer(not his real name), who kept an eye on us was also our teacher. His kindness and sense of humor were on another level. Generally, there are only two rules between inmates and warders wardens.

I hope you will correct my writing.
Thanks!

I hope these corrections help. Keep up the good writing!

About my child

My child is 2 year old and his name is Gerardo. He is my joy and my desperation,my delight and my trouble. Because he doesn't sleep well,  I'm often very tired. He doesn't like to obey my rules and so I'm which makes me very stressed...but upon seeing his charming smile and big eyes I forget all my fatigues.
To have a child requires a lot of patience, much responsibility and little sleep...but to be mother is the most incredible,extraordinary and fascinating adventure I have ever done embarked upon.
Try to believe.

Regards

Excellent work! My correction are just suggestions on how I would have pharsed it. I am not an expert on grammar, but as a native English speaker, this is how I would have written it.

I hope you get some rest, it is hard being a mother to a toddler. I have 5 children and my least one is 7 years old. The time when they were toddlers went by so fast.

Howl's Moving Castle by Diana Wynne Jones! There's also a movie made from the book, it's not the exact same story line, but it's a great movie. The sound track is so beautiful! I like animated movies.

Will you spend your hard earned money immediately, or save it for the future?

Will you spend your hard earned money immediately, or save it for the future?This question has a different answer for each person. If your salary doesn't even give you the ability to pay your bills, even don’t ability you make your pot bill,not only can't you save money, but you will need to borrow money as well. But for me As for myself, I think that saving money for the future is best better.
There is an episode/incident from my past, thing that I still remember. My grandparents used to live in my uncle’s home; however, my uncle and my grandparents had a problem arise between them and my grandparents they did not want to live there anymore. But they have had no other places that where they can could live in.Fortunately,my father used to had saved and had a large sum of money and he was able to immediately buy a house for my grandparents, which to solved their problem.If he had not saved his money,he would not have been unable to solve this problem help with their dilemma.
I have many wants things that I would like to accomplish. One of them is to traveling whole all of Europe.I don’t want to get have to borrow money from my parents, so I have to save money from now to do this, so I have to save my money, starting now. Present some gifts to my family and friends also need money, I also need money to buy gifts for my family and friends and I think that gifts that which are bought purchased with the money/funds I have earned myself are more valuable to treasured/cherished by others.
Sometimes,when the opportunity comes presents itself, having a large sum of money available means allows that you can hold the opportunity to take control of a situation.Tens years ago,a young man who worked in a chemist’s shop bought a full cauldron and a piece of written paper from a doctor.These two items cost spent him five hundred dollars...the money that he had saved during all from working many long days/ all the time he had worked. working day.This young man did not pay more for it than what he got, for what  in the cauldron was the first coke cola in the world and the words on the paper were how to make it. Many people will find the farsightedness of the young man to be useless. However, but after I read this story, I thought that if the young man had not saved any money,though he knew that the full cauldron was a treasure,he could not have bought it. Anyway In summary,I think that saving money for the future is a really very good idea. If everyone were to save money,there will would be no one who have in debt. <em>or you could say</em>

Instead of trying to correct my previous mistakes on your notebook entry. I rewrote the entry below. Last night, I was tired and made several grammatical mistakes in my correction. I'm sorry. I find italki's small correction screen hard to use because you have to scroll in order to read the whole entry.

My ideal trip

My ideal trip would be to take the paths less traveled. I would like to walk in the forest of Vienna's suburb, admiring the view of the sun gradually hiding itself in the dense forest. While visiting a small Gothic church, I would like to talk with an old priest in German, which I've just begun to study a few months ago, and be able to listen to him share his stories and songs from the past. In Paris I would leisurely search for the ideal restaurant and then after having had a delicious dinner, while sipping a glass of wine, I would revel in the music that the little band there is playing. I would like( or to break up the redundancy in saying "I would like", you could also say "I would enjoy looking for a hotel") to look for a hotel while speaking in Polish, a language that I have just begun to learn. During a trip to the Netherlands, I would like to visit a shop and quietly(always put your adverbs as close to the verb as possible) select a pair of sabots.

In summary, I like the independance that comes with planning my own trip. If only I could travel to any place that I want to visit. Often I think, is there any guide that will lead the visitors of Germany to visit those large and small castles...no matter how intact or destroyed, instead of going on Berlin Fernsehturm’s sightseeing layer? Or which tour group, will spend a whole day at a monestary in Switzerland and listen to the monks sing, instead of spending time skiing on the Alps? Only by traveling alone, can I be able to achieve my wishes.

Being able to explore in a strange environment(or you could say "an unknown place") is very exciting! It is an unforgettable experience! This method of traveling will improve my ability to communicate with different and interesting people. From planning the route of the trip to selecting where to go, reserving the hotel, preparing the articles I need, buying the air tickets and train tickets, all these are training(preparations/tasks) that I like and enjoy. Unfortunatley, tour groups have already taken care of everything. Though/Although traveling in a group led by a tour guide may be enjoyable for many tourists, it is not for me. They may only get to take some pictures at scenic spots and buy souvenirs during their journey. I like the freedom and independence that comes with planning your own trip.