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The trip which I like
I like this trip. I like to walk in the forest in of Vienna’s suburb, admiring the view of the sun gradually hiding itself in the dense forest;or to walk into a small Gothic church, talking and talk with the old priest in Germany, which I have just began to learn study several months ago, to listen to him tell share the past stories and songs from the past. After seeking for more than a hour, I like it that I finally finding found the restaurant that I want to go in Paris and after seeking for more than a hour,then,having had a delicious supper, I like reveling in the music that the little band at the restaurant is playing and the wine;. I like to seeking(looking) for a hotel, using while speaking Polish, that which I have not studied (for very long, or in a long time) for much time. I like to selecting a pair of sabots quietly in a shop in Netherlands.
In a word summary, I like free trips. If only that, I can could travel to visit whatever place any place I want to visit. Thinking this, is there any guide that will led the visitors to of Germany to visit those large and small castles--no matter how intact or destroyed, instead of going on Berlin Fernsehturm’s sightseeing layer? Or,which tour group will spend a whole day at a monestary in Switzerland and to listen to the monks sing, delaying the time of skiing on the Alps? Only by traveling alone,I can can I be able to achieve these my wishes.
Exploring Getting to explore in a strange environment is very exciting! It will be a very unforgettable experience. This is a training and that will improve an ability--the ability of to communicate with strange(different and interesting) people. From the planning the route of trip to selecting where to go, reserving the hotel, preparing the articles I need, buying the air tickets and train tickets, these are all training(preparations/tasks) that I like. Unfortunately,tour groups have already taken care of every thing. Though traveling in a group led by a tour guide may be enjoyable for many tourists who get used to take some picture at scenery spots and buy some souvenirs during the journey is a very good choice,it is not fit for me. They may only get to take some pictures at scenic spots and buy souvenirs during the journey. I only like the free and independence trip. I like the freedom and independence that comes with planning your own trip.
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My ideal trip
My ideal trip would be to take the paths less traveled. I would like to walk in the forest of Vienna's suburb, admiring the view of the sun gradually hiding itself in the dense forest. While visiting a small Gothic church, I would like to talk with an old priest in German, which I've just begun to study a few months ago, and be able to listen to him share his stories and songs from the past. In Paris I would leisurely search for the ideal restaurant and then after having had a delicious dinner, while sipping a glass of wine, I would revel in the music that the little band there is playing. I would like( or to break up the redundancy in saying "I would like", you could also say "I would enjoy looking for a hotel") to look for a hotel while speaking in Polish, a language that I have just begun to learn. During a trip to the Netherlands, I would like to visit a shop and quietly(always put your adverbs as close to the verb as possible) select a pair of sabots.
In summary, I like the independance that comes with planning my own trip. If only I could travel to any place that I want to visit. Often I think, is there any guide that will lead the visitors of Germany to visit those large and small castles...no matter how intact or destroyed, instead of going on Berlin Fernsehturm’s sightseeing layer? Or which tour group, will spend a whole day at a monestary in Switzerland and listen to the monks sing, instead of spending time skiing on the Alps? Only by traveling alone, can I be able to achieve my wishes.
Being able to explore in a strange environment(or you could say "an unknown place") is very exciting! It is an unforgettable experience! This method of traveling will improve my ability to communicate with different and interesting people. From planning the route of the trip to selecting where to go, reserving the hotel, preparing the articles I need, buying the air tickets and train tickets, all these are training(preparations/tasks) that I like and enjoy. Unfortunatley, tour groups have already taken care of everything. Though/Although traveling in a group led by a tour guide may be enjoyable for many tourists, it is not for me. They may only get to take some pictures at scenic spots and buy souvenirs during their journey. I like the freedom and independence that comes with planning your own trip.
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