私は日本の伝統文化に魅力を感じており、習字や武士道など、色々な伝統的文化に興味があるので日本語を勉強し始めたのです。

jhonatadetsuさんは？

(X)I would like to be corrected my English if there are some mistakes.

(O)I would appreciate it if you could correct any mistakes I make.

*Grammar note: In Japanese, you use 「。。添削されてほしい。。」right? And when you translate it into English, you would use the passive voice (i.e 'to be corrected' instead of 'to correct'). But in English, we never use the passive voice when referring to someone else's actions.

Next, I would like to write about what happened today.
It was hard, because there are many accidents. -> A lot of things happened today.
This morning, I went to language school which is in the city by bus.
I took the wrong bus, so I didn't arrive at school on time. (You can also say 'to get to school on time')
I was upset and rushed to my class, but there were only a few students and a teacher. (were* = past tense)
Many students are lose, so it was ok to be late. (What do you mean by lose?)
Anyway, being late is not good for my studying, so I should be careful next time.

When the lesson starts, I found my Japanese classmate is a little bit bad.
She was late, too, but she didn't come to the table where I sit.
She didn't talk with me, because I am a Japanese.
I don't feel sad, but I want to speak better than her. (What do you mean by 'better than her'?)
The class was difficult and hard for me, but I have to study by myself.

That's why I am so tired, but I have a nice time with my host family.
An ice cream they served to me was really yummy!! -> They let me have some ice cream which was really yummy!
It was sold at Gelato Messina.
I won't forget the name of the ice cream shop until I visit.

That's all for today. Good night.

Your English is very good! I tried my best to correct your entry in as much detail as I could. If you have trouble understanding any of the corrections I made above, just let me know.

How is your experience studying in Australia so far? I actually live in Sydney, so if you have any questions about things to do, and sights to see etc. feel free to ask!

Good luck with your studies!

English grammar

It is so difficult for me to learn English grammar!
Japanese and English have very different word ordering!

For example
In English, you would say "I like English."
But, in Japanese you say "I English like."

I am learning how to translate sentences From English into Japanese.
"So widespread and accepted is the contemporary passion for sunbathing, and ・・・”
I translated this sentence !
「現代の日光浴とそれゆえ起こる日焼けを強く望むというのは、非常に広く浸透し、一般的になっているので、・・・」
It was so tiring!!!!!!!!!!!
I want to enjoy learning English more!
But I have to translate these kinds of sentences in my exams ;(
I guess all I can do is study harder;(

If you've got any questions about any of the above corrections, just ask me :)

Casual Conversation!

My native language is Japanese since I grew up in Japan.

I came to Australia 7 years ago but many of my friends are Japanese.

So, I want to have more opportunities to improve my spoken English!