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    聖誕老人

    聖誕老人的外貌
    聖誕老人都是我們都的爺爺。他的外貌是可討喜的:他有著白色長長的鬍鬚;,他當然很老了,但是沒有人知道他幾歲。他有著圓圓的臉蛋及胖胖的身體,他的臉上總是充滿笑容,而且他的聲音是友好善的。難怪小朋友很喜歡坐在他的大腿上坐和並請求他們最想要的禮物。

    聖誕老人的家鄉
    他住在北極或是薩米,再一次(不過)沒有人知道真正的位置。因為那是個很遠很遠的地方(國度)。那裡的氣候非常寒冷。所以為了不生病,他必須穿保暖的衣服。他穿著一件紅色大衣,一頂同樣顏色的帽子和一雙靴子。

    聖誕老人的朋友:小精靈和馴鹿
    一整年,很多很多的小精靈,在聖誕老人的工作室裡,幫著他準備為小朋友的禮物。在聖誕前平安夜(平安夜=silent night),12月24日,聖誕老人把禮物放在一個張馴鹿拉的雪橇上。領頭的馴鹿叫魯道夫。他有著紅色且閃亮亮的鼻子。

    聖誕老人來小朋友的家
    聖誕老人乘著飛天雪橇來到有禮貌的小朋友的家。他從煙囪爬進房子裡,背著一大袋禮物。在很裝飾繽紛的聖誕樹下,他堆滿了聖誕禮物。他喝小朋友給他的牛奶和並給馴鹿胡蘿蔔。在德國也有鞭打老人。他在聖誕節前夜夕,來到沒有禮貌的小朋友的家中懲罰他們。

    Hello everyone, I have two weeks to write an essay about christmas. This is only the first part. Please can you help me correct it, make it sound better or give your ideas ?

    Furthermore, does anyone knows a taiwanese tale of christmas, or a christmas song in chinese-taiwanese ? Please share !

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    我的老师让我们写作文。你可不可以查一下,对不对? 谢谢!

    "你怎么看待课文中剪花的现象? 如果遇到这样的现象你怎么办?"

    我想每个人有可以选择作坏事或者好事。 不过,每个人都有自己的常理意見, 所以你我的见解比我的有区别。,因为所以我们不可以能据理力争。但是我觉得有很多情况每人不由得不剪花, 比如说你或者你的亲人饿了,需要帮助, 也受难。(Eating flowers?!!)可是常天平常你不应该剪花, 因为我们都想渴望美好事物,都想住在漂亮的地方。如果你需要剪花,你必须找到公田间,就在那儿采集那儿的花。 因为在这课课文有几个演员, 我对每个说一边。如果我看到一个人剪花我佯作不知, 因为我不想有發生冲突,不知道这个人有什么常隱情。假如有人看到我剪花也而责骂我, 我會说出来我的常青隱情, 也说我且下不为例。如果是我朋友要剪花的,我會开玩笑的责骂他, 后来我们都发笑了, 我谢謝他。

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    Is Skype OK?

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    One Thing that everyone should Experience in their Lifetime If you ask me what is everyone should experience in their lifetime, I will give you that to love a person as my answer at once. Is there a person that usually makes you smile, you wouldn’t like to see he or she unhappy, hope yourself could accompany him or her often, bring more happiness for him or her, and protect him or her from harm? Even always thinking about that a person before yourself, giving him or her everything you could. Is there such a special person in your heart? The answer may be your parents, who have taken care of you since you were born; the answer may be your good friends, who always share moods with you; the answer may be the one whom is seen as your destiny, promise each other get together forever; the answer may be your children, whom are angels that were given by God, and so on. But why you so emphasize that person? It is all because of love. As the Bible says,” Though I have the gift of prophecy, and understand all mysteries and all knowledge, and though I have all faith, so that I could remove mountains, but have not love, I am nothing.” Love almost can be called the most important lesson in our lifetime. The more you love, the more you care. It is not only between couples but also between families and friends. To love a person doesn’t mean just being crazy about somebody, it also means understanding and accepting all of he or she, including those imperfections. Like the saying goes, “Love me, love my dog.” Maybe there are some concepts of his or hers that you couldn’t accept at first, but step by step, you can get used to them, or make he or she change them, because that person love you, too. Scientists always say that one of the most dangerous animals is female elephants with children, due to love
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    About me (written in Chinese (traditional characters))

    你好!我傢家有五口人。媽媽、爸爸、妹妹和弟弟還有我。我媽媽是醫生。今年我復複習中文漢字。我寫漢字很慢。

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    心情札記

    當對於生活產生無力感時,是什麼支撐著你走下去呢?

    我的財產就是我可愛的家人和好朋友們,他們是我所珍惜的一切。我是那種把心事都隱藏在心中的人,我不和人分享不愉快的事,而我最討厭那種人,那種強迫我說出是什麼事情使我難過的人,他們認為說出口後,會感到放鬆許多,也許那對你有用,對我來說只是備增壓力。

    寂靜的夜晚,戴上耳機,穿上慢跑鞋,離開紛擾的人群,是唯一讓我放鬆的時刻。面對生活的壓力、人事物的變化和人與人相處的方式,這是我唯一可以忘記一切的時刻。有時候我真希望我是空氣、我是水、我是雲,當人好累,在乎的好多。("在乎"和"在意"是一樣的意思)不知道因為是小時候過得太好還是現在過得比較辛苦,我真的很懷念過去,那種單純的生活和我可愛的狗狗們。有時候很想要怪爸爸為什麼讓這個家變成這樣,但人在事業上總是起起落落,況且一個人的個性是如何說改就能改呢?我知道,靠自己比較快,靠自己比較快...

    冷酷的表現是我完美的偽裝,你參透不了我的心情,最能了解的應該就是環繞在我身邊極度不悅的氣氛吧。笑太多很累,尤其是將微笑變成習慣的時候,我不知道我為何連不想笑的時候都面帶微笑與人說話,為什麼連我都變得如此噁心。

    媽媽總是想要摸透我的心,可是我拒任何人於千里之外,就只對她說我沒事。對我來說,把煩惱丟給別人只是增加別人的困擾,我寧可獨自哀傷。我的確很悲觀,因為我活在當下,我不做無謂的幻想,我思考未來的走向,國家的走向。當一個很需要被人重視的議題被人漠視時,那是多大的悲哀啊!

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