Can someone help me to correct my story? URGENT The story is for a class and I have few time! If someone can help me it would be perfect! THANKS! "Once upon a time there was a boy that dreamed of flying. He watched the sky everydays and looked sadly the flight of the birds. (Boy): I want to be like them. But I can't. I'm only a human. He allways returned at home with pain in his heart. One day, when he was walking on the street, he saw a butterfly that was flying close to him. He followed it and suddenly he ran into an old woman. (Boy): - Excuse me. (Old woman): - Don't worry little boy. I know what do you want. (Boy): - And what do I want? (Old woman): - You want to fly. (Boy): - And how do you know it? (Old woman): - Jajaja... I'm a witch and I know a lot of things. (Boy): - Then... You can make me fly! (Old woman): - You can fly whenever you want. (Boy): - No! I can't! I can't fly like a bird. (Old woman): But you can fly like a human. (Boy): And how can I do it? (Old woman): - You only need to use your imagination. The old woman smiled at the boy and walked down the street. He thought about the words that the old woman said to him and he tried to do it. He saw the sky other again and he flew with his mind away from there. (Boy): - I like it. Maybe it's better than flying like a bird."

Today I woke up and I felt a little bit different... I felt a little bit different when I woke up, in the good way, and now I'm feeling right! I had a dream that I don't remember very well, but I realized that the life is only one. I think I need to do a chance in my little world, that it's me. I believe that today can be different and amazing. I'm realizing that it's important to be with the people that I love and give to them all the affection that I can offer. Sometimes we do things without thinking or thoughtlessly (I don't know what it's the best way to say it). Sometimes we aren't conscient of everything that happens in our inside. Moreover, it's difficult to listen to our heart, because we are quite busy hearing all the comments that the people say and being aware of them. If the life finished today, what would I like to do? Maybe it could be a good thought every morning for me.

Be happy There are few things in the life that are important. One of those things is being happy. The family, friends and love are also important, but today I will talk about happiness. Is the moment to say what is the happiness for me. I think the happiness means more than a superficial description. It's feeling the life with all the senses being conscient of all. The happiness is not only being happy, it's also feeling all the feelings. I think that the happiness appears in the important moments and in the little moments too. We need to be openmind to understand the life and to be happy. All the people can be happy and sometimes the people that have more things is less happy than other that lives in the misery. It's not a matter of having more or less, the question is, ¿are we fine with all we have? The good thing is we can be more and more happy than before.

What is better, using the translator or writing without it? I allways use the translator to write in English, because I don't have a lot of vocabulary and I know that I make mistakes when I write. But sometimes, I spend more time looking for the correct words and sentences than writing the text. In addition, I think the google translator are not always right, but I don't know other translator.

I would like to write my own lyrics in english I want to know more English because I believe that is important to travel and to have a good job. We don't know what will happen in the future. Maybe I will be in U.S.A., maybe in London or in another place. But I know that I really love singing and write lyrics in my language. I also would like to write my own lyrics in English, because the songs in this lenguage sound perfect! There are a lot of combinations of vowals to do rhymes and when I sing or I listen to songs in English it sounds great in my ears. I think now it's impossible to do a song in english, because I don't have vocabulary in English and there are a lot of expressions that I don't know. But I know that in the future I will do songs in English. I hope that and I will do this dream come true.