hey Hi manguys 

I want to getfind someone who can teach me eEnglish and he any one wants to studylearn chinese from me.

I think it is better now! 

You made some  mistakes! First is grammer and second is manners.

You could say hey,but Hello or Hi may be much better.

And you shouldn't say get someone because you are not going to bring them back to your home.

So find could be more accurate. Grammer1. learn something from someone

Hey! Do not ask them to help you to see yuor future! As a Christian,I must tell yuo this.
I know your culture well,but I don't believe you will need iphone5 in underground world.

You know they got a concept goes like this. When people die, they may transform into some kinds of invisible energy. I can tell you:They are right. But not all spirits would stay on earth. In religion,they said:They will go to heaven or hell. Again I can tell you:It's right,too. I know it is hard to understand,but it just goes in its won way. Only the God can explain this phenomenon. But I would tell you:Sometime we shouldn't know too much about them. You can search for lots of informations about this,but why? But I met some ghosts before.

Taiwanese Chinese English

In fact,I will warn them not to do that in front of me. If they don't care about what I say.That's good! Because they will get into trouble. Smoking is the worst way to release your pressure! Why? Because it will not only hurt your health but also hurt people around you. So I just want to tell smokers:Think before leap. Or you will not just shorten your life,besides,people around you. Everytime you smoke! The door of hell will come closer to you. Soon people will go to your tomb yard and say:Rest in peace smoker.