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- How to produdce liquid chocolate? Topic: The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Chocolate comes from the cacao tree which normally is grown in some area of south America, Africa, Indonesia. When the pods turn red, it means that ripe pods can be harvested. Ripe pods produce numerous white cacao beans, which are the virgin materials of chocolate. After harvesting the pods, the cacao beans would be removed and be fermented in a large wood box. Then they are spread in then sun in order to obtain the dried beans. Moving on to next stage, dried beans are packaged in large sacks, and then these sacks are transported to the factory by train or lorry to process further. In factory, beans are put into a oven, and they are roasted at the temperature of between 250 C and 350 C. After being roasted, beans are crushed totally, with the outer shell removed. Finally, the inner part of beans are pressed by machine, in this way the liquid chocolate are gained. That is the whole process of producing liquid chocolate.
September 3, 201301 我的姐姐们
我有两个姐姐. 我很爱她们。她们都很漂亮,也很聪明, 但是她们互相真的不一样。她们都已经结婚了。我的大姐在大学的专业是英文。她喜欢看书还有照顾花园。她有一个女儿。现在她不工作,她呆在家照顾她的女儿。她是家庭妇女,但是她喜欢这样的自在的生活。她在家可以看书和写书。她是一点容易忘事的(她是一个健忘的人)。她只吃有机的食物。我的二姐是相反的。她是事业心强的人。她是社工。她总是很忙, 可是(但是)她很喜欢她的工作。她是效率高的人。她跟她的老公常常旅行。她没有小孩子因为她不想呆在家。我像一点我的大姐,我也像一点我的二姐。
评价:
1、你的中文很棒哦,整体语法几乎没有什么错误,逻辑性很好,完全可以理解。
2、中文的魅力在于它的韵律,以及言简意赅,在词汇充足的前提下,你可以朝着这个方向努力。
0 votedMay 17, 20130Yeah,i used to like to see kongfu films. Jackie Chan, Donnie Yen and Jet Li are my favourate stars who represent the shared memory of the 80s' generation.But with the culture changed,the audiences' taste also changed, so some guys who have humour and positive energy,like Liujishou Zengxiaoxian ,etc are more popular.
0 votedMay 17, 20130- IELTS—A sport This is my IELTS Oral topic card,I answer it below.Please help me correct it and make it much more local and oralize.If it possible help me add some slangs. Describe a sport that you like playing or watching You should say: What the sport is How often you play/watch it Why you like it Whether it is popular in your country Ok,I guess I could begin by saying something about what the sport is and I think I would have to choose jog.Most people know that jog is a prevalent and easy sport.There is no need for you to take many efforts to practice techniques as some team sports,like basketball you need know shooting, passing, dribbling, or rebounding.Jogging is much more easier, you know,everyone can do it . Going on to my next point which is how often I do it ,I really need to add that if I have enough time I usually jog 3 times a week,that means every other day.In fact these days I am busy with preparing my IELTS so I have been out of it for almost a couple of months. And now with reference to why I like it, the point I want to make here is that it helps me loosen up and refresh my mind.You know,when the time i am jogging in the peaceful park ,i can enjoy my own time without the buzzing around me. And so finally then,if I have time, in answer to the question of whether it is popular in my country,really I should mention that it is not as popular as before,because people get used to living in sendentary lifestyle,so they prefer to play electronic sport games or watching sport competitions rather than going outside. So ,that's all, Thank you for listenning.May 14, 201300
Skills
我能够熟练操作计算机,但是对用筷子还是不大熟练。学会操作计算机需要恒心。恒心毅力是一种心智状态(精神品质 jing1/shen2/pin3/zhi4) means mental quality),所以说这是可以培养训练的.
我从来没炒/碰过股票,听说买股票的时候一定要谨慎,许多人担心得不得了,忧虑和紧张会导致失眠Yōulǜ(忧虑)。我也会剁肉馅/duo4(to chop/cut)(This part is right)。另外,我能把柴劈成两半。 [chai pǐ chai2 pi1],我十八岁就会开车了。
宠物
我家的狗特别忠诚,尤其是对我母亲。每当母亲出来时,它们一直在窗户前等着直到她回来。它们一听到她开车进入车道,就赶忙/赶紧跑到门前,开始不停地摇尾巴35。我的狗被宠坏了。
我十分无聊的时候会玩电脑游戏。几天前,因为我头疼,所以心情不好。我就玩了半天的电脑游戏,但是这并没有缓解我的压力。 (What's your meaning 是因为压力导致头疼,然后头疼而心情不好,通过电脑游戏来舒缓压力吗?)0 votedApril 3, 20132
