Hi! I'm new here and this is my first attempt at correcting anyone's work. You do write pretty well, but I agree with Ninjafoxx. Try to keep it to one idea per sentence. :) And just a little grammar tip... We usually use “make” when a new <em>product is</em> <em>created</em> and we usually use "do" when a <em>task is done</em>. 

I hope this helps! :) 

Hello guys , I will be writing about random topics in order to practice my writing.

Hello guys!

Today, I feel like writting about the freezing weather. In some parts of the world, it is very cold at this time. People can suffer really extreme weather conditions and they deal with these bad conditions in their daily lives so it's important to keep warm because people are likely to get frostbite and hypothermia. Both conditions can mean death and in some extreme cases, when people get frostbite, the doctors have to remove the frostbitten areas, like the fingers, in order to avoid a worst gangrene infection.


Some recommendations can be: Try to wear a scarf, hat, gloves. Most of the time, people think that if they dress in heavy clothes, they will keep warm. I don't agree with this. I guess/think it's better to dress a differents wear layers of light clothes in order to keep warming warm. Also, try to stay dry to avoid get getting sick. and Another mistake tha people do make its to drink  is drinking alcohol to stay warm. and This its is not going to help you because alcohol just makes you feel warm for a little while, but the more you drink alcohol the more your body loses the ability to hold heat.


Bye guys. Thanks so much for reviewing my writting writing. :)