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I am a high school reading teacher, I am ESOL certified. I would like to learn French and Portuguese.
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    College students' outlook of on financial Management

    In China, most university students are financially suppored supported by their parents,and not aware about of financially financial management. so sometimes we all cost so much [This phrase is confusing, it implies that people cost money, like buying a person. It will be better to say "Sometimes we spend too much money."]. 
    Some people believe that we have no income, so we don’t have to financial management so we don't have to manage finances. When we make make money, that we can financial management manage finances. In this veiw view ,college students have no idear how to financially management manage finances, and they don’t know how to cost budget. [Cost in not the correct word for this sentence, I think you mean budget.] 
    Other people think that we have to learn how to financially management manage finances. We form a habit of to financially management managing finances now,we make sence of our money , and we know how to cost. [This statement is confusing, I think you are trying to say something like, "we are responsible with our money and know how to budget."]
    In my opinion, I agree with the last view.  I think collenge college students should learn how to financially management manage finances. Only in this way can we know understand the money ,we can know where we must cost spend ,and then don’t cost not spend in on something we don’t need. We need to have a good habits. so I think this is the  college students’ outlook of on financial management.

     

     

    This was a good start! The words financial management are used too much. You can say something like "being responsible with money", or "using money responsibly."

    Some vocabulary words that can help are:

    budget - money set aside for a purpose

    spend - to use money to buy something

    expense - cost


    Hope this helps!

    -RS

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    June 25, 2013
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    June 25,2013

    Today us our class is talked talking about debate. The debate discuss discussion is who agrees/disagrees with the topic. so You can even give your opinion to persuade someone.

    At this moment the debate topic is hard for me, because I need to know more vocabulary and compose clearer sentences.

     

    Good start, hope this helps.

    RS

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    June 24, 2013
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    MONDAY

    Today I'm very occupied for example: My classes started at 8'oclock 8 o'clock and finished at 12'oclock, 12 o'clock. I went to breakfast with my firends friends and after that I went to my volunter volunteer in at the school. I'm here now hoping to my chief. (I don't understand the phrase very well. I think by chief you mean boss. La palabra jefe a veces se traduce a "chief" en realidad seria "boss" por el contexto de la frase. Si esta intentando decir "Estoy aquí esperando ver a mi jefe" seria "I'm here hoping to see my boss.")
    At 7 o'clock I have go to the hospital for my practice! :)

     

     

    Soy nueva en italki, espero que esto le ayude. :)

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    June 24, 2013
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