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College students' outlook of financial Management In China,most university students are financially suppored by their parents,and not aware about financially management.so sometimes we all cost so much . Some People Believe That we have no income.so we don’t have to financial management .when we make make money that we can financial management.in this veiw ,college student have no idear to financially management ,and they don’t know how to cost. Other people think that we have to learn how to financially management ,we form a habit to financially management now,we make sence of our money , and we know how to cost. In my opinion i agree the last yiew.i think collenge student should learn how to financially management .only in this way can we know the money ,we can know where we must cost ,and then don’t cost in something we don’t need.we need to have a good habit.so i think College Students’ Outlook of Financial Management

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College students' outlook of on financial Management

In China, most university students are financially suppored supported by their parents,and not aware about of financially financial management. so sometimes we all cost so much [This phrase is confusing, it implies that people cost money, like buying a person. It will be better to say "Sometimes we spend too much money."]. 
Some people believe that we have no income, so we don’t have to financial management so we don't have to manage finances. When we make make money, that we can financial management manage finances. In this veiw view ,college students have no idear how to financially management manage finances, and they don’t know how to cost budget. [Cost in not the correct word for this sentence, I think you mean budget.] 
Other people think that we have to learn how to financially management manage finances. We form a habit of to financially management managing finances now,we make sence of our money , and we know how to cost. [This statement is confusing, I think you are trying to say something like, "we are responsible with our money and know how to budget."]
In my opinion, I agree with the last view.  I think collenge college students should learn how to financially management manage finances. Only in this way can we know understand the money ,we can know where we must cost spend ,and then don’t cost not spend in on something we don’t need. We need to have a good habits. so I think this is the  college students’ outlook of on financial management.

 

 

This was a good start! The words financial management are used too much. You can say something like "being responsible with money", or "using money responsibly."

Some vocabulary words that can help are:

budget - money set aside for a purpose

spend - to use money to buy something

expense - cost


Hope this helps!

-RS

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