我今年秋天要到中国去留学，高兴极了

外国朋友们好：(Hello, friends!)

我终于决定安排了今年的计划。（I have finally decided on my plan for this year).
很多考虑以三思后，我斩钉截铁地决断了决定今年秋天要到中国去留学。（这样说不好。考虑很多就不能说“斩钉截铁”了。）（After thinking about it a lot, I am resolute in my decision to go to China this fall to study abroad).
我一直对去中国留学一直很感兴趣，可不知道最合适的时间应该去什么时间最适合去。（I've always been immensely interested in studying abroad in China, but I didn't know when the best time to go was).
决断做了最后的决定了以后，我很高兴起来了。秋天，我等不了了。After making my final decision, I became very happy. I can't wait for this fall.
虽然我当前的中文老师很棒，但貌似因为她不是中国人，所以貌似不能很清楚地回答我的复杂的问题回答得很清楚。连中文单词细微的区别（比如说，近同义词之间）连她也不清楚。(Even though my current Chinese teacher is awesome, because she is not Chinese, it seems she can't answer my complicated questions very clearly. Even she does not understand the tiny differences between individual words very clearly (between near Chinese synonyms, for example).
我的确希望越学越会好！I do hope that the more I study, the more I will be competent.

顺便说一下，我刚才刚刚学的最喜欢的成语就是“狼吞虎咽”，因为我觉得我这样总是像是在吃中餐。＝） （“刚才” makes me feel that you learnt that Chengyu right before you wrote this composition.）

By the way, my favorite chengyu that I've just learned is 狼吞虎咽 because I feel like I always eat Chinese food like this.

每月一天・・・

每月一天我需要休息工作。每月我需要休息一天。为了治疗抑郁病症我需要去医院。

I made them brief here: i. 崩溃和倒塌 Your spirit 崩溃; your house 倒塌. ii. 行贿和贿赂 行贿：intransitive 贿赂：transitive What's more, 行贿 can be used for the opposite to 受贿. iii. 志气和野心 志气是褒义词。但是我觉得野心既可以是褒义词，也可以是贬义词。 可以说：“我有XXX的志向。”但不能说“我有XXX的野心。” When you say someone 有野心, you appreciate it (it's positive). When you say someone 野心太大, you don't appreciate it (it's negative). Here is an idiom: 野心勃勃. It means "ambitious", which is positive. iv. 焰火,烟花 Is there any difference? We say 烟花 more (in everyday talking). Perhaps on news or books you can see 焰火 more.

新闻标题要简短，这里的“的”都可以不要。 Dach一般不说“屋盖”而说“屋顶”。 可以说：切尔诺贝利核电站遗址房屋坍塌引发担忧。 或者说：切尔诺贝利遗址坍塌引担忧。

中文和英语，生词，造句子   中英对照造句练习（your title is fine, though it's not so good as this one.）

 

他从美国回来了后，突然很有野心地学习英语。After he returned from America，suddenly he was very motivated to learn English. I suggest you say: 突然很积极地学英语。

他是一个很有野心的人，不管做什么事情他都做得很细心。
He is a very ambitious person, whatever he is doing, he always is doing very accurate work.

他将来找到好工作的野心让他很努力的学习。The ambition to get a good work in the future, lets him study very busy. This sentence doesn't make much sense. Say: 找到好工作的志向催促他非常努力地学习。

侦探还没识破犯人的阴谋。 Good one :)
The agent still have not uncovered the intrigue of the bad peoples.

被告人花很多钱为了贿赂作证说谎。
The defendant remitted a lot of money for corruption to let the attestor to tell a lie.

Besides the “作证”, the order is not proper. And say “被告” instead of “被告人”. “被告人” is fine, though. Say:为了贿赂证人说谎，被告花了很多钱。

作证被被告人纳贿了。 证人被被告贿赂了。
the attestor was corrupted by the defandant.

作证被犯人的行贿灭口了。 = =Do you know “灭口” means to kill someone for keeping him silent? There is a good phrase for your situation: 封口. The money can be called 封口费. You can say: 犯人通过贿赂，把证人的嘴封上了。
the attestor became silent by the corruption of the criminal.

职业失败了后失业之后，他自甘堕落地过日子。After he lost his job, he wallowed in degeneration.

他生病了后身体状态勃勃起来。After recovering from being sick, his body condition was getting vivid.

生病=to get sick. Say: 病好了以后，他的身体状况越来越好了。

他的愿望就是摆脱改掉抽烟的习气习惯。
His wish is to get rid of the bad habit of smoking.

为了今天的情人节，他想办好爽口的酒席。 爽口 is for food. You can say 爽口的食物/菜肴/饮料. 酒席 is not food. Say: 因为今天是情人节，他想办个诱人的酒席。
Because of the Valentine's Day today, he wanna prepare a very delicious dinner.

对我一个年轻人来说，老人一般都是曾经沧海的人。 （Good sentence, but can be better as: 对于像我这样的年轻人来说，……）
In the eyes of an adolescent like me, old people often are very familiar to how the world is working.

他每次犯错误的时候，感觉很尴尬。 I think it'd be better with a “都”. 他每次犯错误的时候都感觉很尴尬。<em>OR</em> 每次犯错误的时候，他都感觉很尴尬。
By doing a mistake, he always feels very ashamed.

激光是很摩登的技术。 I think 摩登 is for "fashional". For technology like this, say: 激光技术是很先进的技术。
Laser technology is a very recent one.

我的名字是。。。。

我的名字是Diamond.我是个学生。我17岁。我是从NewYork来。您你从哪里来？