Check my Poncky's story and try to help me to improve it Now I think about all the stories that people talk about their best friends, well, I think that everybody has a best friend that always is there for us. But someone perfect, loyal, real, trustful, and with the deepest heart ever? Well, gratefully I had the luck to meet that living being one time in my life. I was 1 year old when my parents arrived to my house with a little puppy, was a female, her name was Poncky, she was 3 months old. I don't remember how we met, or what we used to do, I just remember that we grew up together and she didn't like me, she had problems with the kids I don't know why. She was a gift for my sister, who are older than me. But at the time that we grew up, my sisters and my parents forgot about her, but I didn't, I always was there for her and she needed me, we did a lot of things together, I remembered that I played that she was a little lion and I have to run away from her, it was really fun. I won't ever forget when I had bad moments and she went to me like she was sad too. But at the time that I became a teenager, she became a grandma. My sweet 16 arrived, 15 years later since that puppy came to my house, but she wasn't a puppy anymore, she was 15 years old. It was my turn to take care of her, I had to help her to move, feed her directly at her mouth, love her, and hug her strongly when she began dreaming forever. Now I can say that I did have that special friend that is really hard to find, my best friend, my puppy.

Could you please check my story and give me some tips to improve my writing? One of my dreams when I was a little kid was to be a great veterinary some day, is just that I like to much work with animals that I want to take care of them, but I have a little problem, I've already graduate from high school, and this year I'd to begin college but when I was just register myself for veterinary, my dad called me and persuaded me to register in architecture, at the beginning I think that it was a good idea but when I did my admission test I failed. I felt bad of course, but now I don't know what to do, if let this year pass and register in veterinary at the next opportunity or begin study architecture in june this year but in another university. Is difficult because I don't let him down but I also want to make my dreams come true.