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Check my Poncky's story and try to help me to improve it Now I think about all the stories that people talk about their best friends, well, I think that everybody has a best friend that always is there for us. But someone perfect, loyal, real, trustful, and with the deepest heart ever? Well, gratefully I had the luck to meet that living being one time in my life. I was 1 year old when my parents arrived to my house with a little puppy, was a female, her name was Poncky, she was 3 months old. I don't remember how we met, or what we used to do, I just remember that we grew up together and she didn't like me, she had problems with the kids I don't know why. She was a gift for my sister, who are older than me. But at the time that we grew up, my sisters and my parents forgot about her, but I didn't, I always was there for her and she needed me, we did a lot of things together, I remembered that I played that she was a little lion and I have to run away from her, it was really fun. I won't ever forget when I had bad moments and she went to me like she was sad too. But at the time that I became a teenager, she became a grandma. My sweet 16 arrived, 15 years later since that puppy came to my house, but she wasn't a puppy anymore, she was 15 years old. It was my turn to take care of her, I had to help her to move, feed her directly at her mouth, love her, and hug her strongly when she began dreaming forever. Now I can say that I did have that special friend that is really hard to find, my best friend, my puppy.

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Check my Poncky's story and try to help me to improve it

(I was thinking about all the stories people have about their best friends... sólo una sugerencia) Now I think about all the stories that people talk about their best friends, well, I think that everybody has a best friend that always is there for us. But someone perfect, loyal, real, trustful, and with the deepest heart ever? Well, gratefully I had the luck to of meeting that living being one time in my life.

I was 1 year old when my parents arrived to my house with a little puppy, she or it was a female, her name was Poncky, she was 3 months old. I don't remember how we met, or what we used to do, I just remember that we grew up together and she didn't like me, she had problems with the kids I don't know why. She was a gift for my sister, who are is older than me. But at the time that we grew up, my sisters and my parents forgot about her, but I didn't, I always was there for her and she needed me, we did a lot of things together, I remembered that I played that she was a little lion and I have had to run away from her, it was really fun. I won't ever forget when I had bad moments and she went came to me like she was sad too.

But at the time that I became a teenager, she became a grandma. My sweet 16 arrived, 15 years later since that puppy came to my house, but she wasn't a puppy anymore, she was 15 years old. It was my turn to take care of her, I had to help her to move, feed her directly at her mouth, love her, and hug her strongly when she began dreaming forever (this is very, very deep language). Now I can say that I did have that special friend that is really hard to find, my best friend, my puppy.

 

¡Wow, maravilloso! Gracias por compartir.  Tengo una pregunta.  ¿Qué significa "Ponchy"?

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