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Describing people in German.
Task, Describing People
Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.
My attempt.
Ich bin eine Frau. Ich bin kein Mann. Er ist groß. Er ist nicht klein. Sie ist alt. Sie ist nicht jung. Das Mädchen ist klein. Das Mädchen ist nicht groß. Du bist ein Mann. Du bist keine Frau. Du bist klein. Du bist nicht groß.;)
0 votedJuly 28, 20130The weekend is coming
Hi everybody!
It is the spring now and everything starts to flourish; such as trees, the flowers and so on. (我發現這個句子和其它句子並不相關,有點突兀,所以我把它獨立出來作為文章的開端。)
When the Friday is comes, l am always very happy and start planning my weekend. I am excited when l think about the upcoming weekend. (1.這句有點重複前面句子的意味,所以在用字上我做了更改。2.這個句子的順序應該要出現在"敘述週末活動"之前。)On weekends, we always drive the car to the suburbs with friends for a breath of fresh air on weekends. We forget about the job/daily work and just enjoy our life with family/beloved ones.
And what am l going to do <em>this</em> weekend? (斜體字為強調語氣) On Saturday, we are going to invite a friend to have morning tea, and then take our children to the park; on Sunday, l will accompany my friend look for the new house. (By the way, there are still many people in China fond of buying houses for an investment even though the government has been taking measures to control.) (這一句跟文章主題不是很相關,如果是以前面的句子來延伸,就用By the way"順帶一提"來接著說明。)
Sadly, after I completed/after completing the English sentences above, l realize that there is still much room for improvement.
Have a great weekend! (祝福語通常放在文章末!)
0 votedMarch 25, 20132Learning English for my business trip to Korea (看了整篇文章後我發現主題似乎比較偏"學習英文"!)
Next month_l will have to go to Korea. It is just a business trip; however, it is new to my colleague and me. (I think it's better to say: Although it is just a business trip, it is new to my colleague and me.) We will go to Inchon (Or: We will visit Inchon). l am learning English now and get everything ready for this trip. l am also looking for some suggestions from other friendly people. (因為你用了also,如果接著"我也希望.."的句子聽起來並沒有跟前面句子相關。我建議寫"我也正在尋求其他人的建議",這樣和前面提到的"為出差/旅遊作準備"就比較有連貫性。)
Yesterday_l saw a suggestion: Listening to English music can improve the spoken English. On my way home_l talked to my partner who majors in English about it. She said that it is not suitable for everyone/every person. Therefore she suggested me to download some ??English document?? (English "documentary films" or?) from the Internet, and then listen carefully and repeat after each individual sentence. The more you practice, the better you pronounce.
The English vocabulary and grammar are easy for me to study. Although I passed the CET-6 (College English Test) during my time at university, I have no confidence in my spoken English due to my pronunciation. Maybe I can read the words, but I am not sure that whether my pronunciation is correct.0 votedMarch 22, 20133Heute geht es mir schlecht / Mir geht es heute schlecht
Es regnet heute._Ich hatte vier Stunden *Unterricht._Die Schülerinnen und Schüler waren (ziemlich) haben (im Unterricht) viel Lärm gemacht und es war im Klassenzimmer ziemlich laut. Es war nur ein anstrengender Tag.
(1) 大部分我把時態改成過去式/完成式,因為你是在敘述已發生過的事情。
(2) Unterricht 不可數,在德文中通常是用"課時(幾小時的課)"來表達上了多少課。
(3) "學生"可以直接用Schüler,這個字單複數同型,當它是複數時已經包含男學生和女學生。
(4) 德語常用"anstrengend(令人疲累的)"來形容事物。"müde"也有疲勞之意,但通常用在"ich bin müde." 等形容自身狀態。
加油! :-)
0 votedMarch 19, 20131
