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The weekend is coming
Hi everybody!
It is the spring now and everything starts to flourish; such as trees, the flowers and so on. (我發現這個句子和其它句子並不相關,有點突兀,所以我把它獨立出來作為文章的開端。)
When the Friday is comes, l am always very happy and start planning my weekend. I am excited when l think about the upcoming weekend. (1.這句有點重複前面句子的意味,所以在用字上我做了更改。2.這個句子的順序應該要出現在"敘述週末活動"之前。)
On weekends, we always drive the car to the suburbs with friends for a breath of fresh air on weekends. We forget about the job/daily work and just enjoy our life with family/beloved ones.
And what am l going to do this weekend? (斜體字為強調語氣) On Saturday, we are going to invite a friend to have morning tea, and then take our children to the park; on Sunday, l will accompany my friend look for the new house. (By the way, there are still many people in China fond of buying houses for an investment even though the government has been taking measures to control.) (這一句跟文章主題不是很相關,如果是以前面的句子來延伸,就用By the way"順帶一提"來接著說明。)
Sadly, after I completed/after completing the English sentences above, l realize that there is still much room for improvement.
Have a great weekend! (祝福語通常放在文章末!)
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